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Reviews for Secret Bliss

By : InfernalParadise
  • From LaBibliographe on March 18, 2007
    Chapters 14-16: Everything they had together is falling apart. He's retreating into himself, and she's doing the same. They seemed to be so much in love. Why is it all falling apart? It's as though his past has created a huge fissure in the rock they had based their lives on. Did he really think he could erase that second bedroom with a nursery? Well, maybe that could have done it, trading death in for new life. But this story is definitely going very dark. It feels like Lucius doesn't want to completely leave his past behind, it's too much a part of him a MALFOY, which he's alluded to many times as something almost holy, and impossible to evade.
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 18, 2007
    Chapters 11-14: If I could be alone in a mansion with Lucius, I'm not sure I would care if the world didn't like us as a couple or if we had kids. I'm not sure I'd remember my name, frankly. I'd be reduced to gibberish much of the time if he kept taking his (and my) clothes off. And good call, Vivienne not wearing knickers, heck, why should she? They'd only get in the way, as Lucius has shown time after time.

    Now, why was Lucius suddenly overtaken by some alter ego and become vicious to Vivienne? His former nasty self emerging from dry dock? I do think I'd stay clear of that second bedroom, though. No happy memories there.

    So we're coming to the Weasley New Year's Eve party. Back to reading...
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 18, 2007
    Chapters 7-10: Well, Voldemort is dead (one head removed from one body - check) and poor Vivienne has lost her immortality. I didn't know why she did, was it because she caused the death of someone else? Maybe I missed the reason. But now she's trying to live as a mortal. It's good Lucius kept her from attempting a swan dive from the high window. Too bad she can't have children now. (Not sure why that happened either...) Her new body seems to have gone back to its virginal state, but some of her internal female organs are now missing? I'm a bit confused, but that's nothing new.

    So at least they appear to have made their peace with each other and the only problems now are her youthful appearance and Lucius being her professor and much older. So the wizarding world doesn't have trophy wives?
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 18, 2007
    Chapters 4-6: Those special arrangements were HOT. But I do think Vivienne could have gotten more mileage out of Lucius if she hadn't been so uncomfortable showing him certain skin-y parts that apparently he'd seen many times before. Lighten up, girl! Lie back and enjoy!

    At least Lucius has explained why he can't introduce her around like he would wish, and I think Voldemort's re-emergence is a very viable reason. Lucius feeling pain at knowing her instead of indifference dictates powerful feelings. She should take that as a compliment from Mr. Ice Cold Malfoy.

    Omigosh, Viviene called Lucius a 'smart ass' and got away with it. She definitely has affected him - for the good. And he wants more children? Yummy. I liked his comment, "Feel free to worship me for my intelligence." Oh yeah, that and so much more! ;-)

    Oh, snicker, Vivienne's family raising true daughters and keeping wizards for pleasure - so FUNNY. And nice psychology, that she made Lucius want to change, as Draco said.

    So now I know more about Sephors - immortals who, like the Highlander series, appropriate all abilities from previous sephors except I guess they don't have to kill them to get the powers. Geez, it sounds like Vivienne is planning on not being around to raise their child. Why? This isn't going to be a sad story, is it? I really don't like sad stories. They're too depressing. Now I'm worried...


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  • From LaBibliographe on March 18, 2007
    Chapters 1-3: So far, all I know is that Lucius is in love with Vivienne, who has wings (sometimes) and can make it snow in the bathroom. I looked up the word sephor and got nothing until I added an 'a' for sephora. Then I got a reference to 'Zipporah' which means bird. (And a large cosmetics chain...)

    Vivienne got angry with Lucius for not presenting her to his friends at a restaurant, but I didn't really know why. I guess I'll find out in a future chapter. Narcissa and Lucius are no longer married and they're both okay with that. I hope that comes out in a future chapter too.

    So, back to reading, 'cause at this point I don't understand who Vivienne is at all. I guess the story is designed that way and I'm just impatient. Yup, that's me, Femininicus impatiensis. 8-)
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  • From ANON - Ladytalon on August 26, 2006
    *cries like a baby*

    I loved this story!!!! But so sad at the end :(
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  • From ANON - Ladytalon on August 24, 2006
    Okay, I see that I demanded an explanation too soon from you *G* Interesting explanation of her background, and very sad about her mother - how horrible! But it makes for a great story... :)
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  • From ANON - Ladytalon on August 23, 2006
    Hi! Found your story by following the link on your name...this is really different and very interesting (I'm on Chapter 3 already) so am bookmarking this so I can find it easily :) Is this the sequel to something I should have read before, or do I just need to calm down and read more? :D Good stuff so far...
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  • From ANON - ladysnape on February 07, 2006
    I finally finsihed your story, I have been reading it for awhiel, *Sniff* there have been a few stories on here that have made me cry but this one took the cake. Ihave to admit I am a sucker for the stories of HP characters with OC's they seem so much better. Thankyou for your reviews on my story I want to update but cause of the stupid glitch I cannot o_o not happy lol, if you ever want to find out more though I would be more then happy to email you them, my emails on my author page, I really loved this story, you should write more, well I am off now to read your POTO ones I love that movie lol
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  • From BeautifulVoice on September 18, 2005
    Great start! I like your portrayal of Lucius, & Vivienne is interesting too. The wings were a surprise. I wonder what's up your sleeve. ~Lily
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  • From ANON - LukedaDuke on August 13, 2005
    Much reading this time, two chapters at once both very good in describing the love between Vivienne and Lucius flavoured with some Smut ;)
    Very good writing I enjoyed reading it after just finishing HP Book 6 which is very sad in the end! It says there, Dumbledore would have enjoyed
    more love in this world! Nothing more to add than keep on writing!

    db
    Lukas
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  • From ANON - LukedaDuke on August 03, 2005
    Nice Chapter 8, a little melancholic but that doesn't matter, that fits perfectly!
    I was so surprised after Chapter 7, now Voldemort being dead that I thought Chapter 8 would have to be happy but it isn't,
    Vivienne is sad because she lost her powerful ability! I hope you continue to write I am eager to find out how Vivienne handles being human, but please don't
    kill her ;)
    One word to all the flamers out there, try to write better stories or simply shut up!

    db
    Lukas
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  • From ANON - SammieCurls on July 31, 2005
    I'm glad Vivenne and Harry are alright. Great Chapter!

    Love always
    Sammie Curls
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  • From ANON - LukedaDuke on July 30, 2005
    Interesting Chapter with quite new and unexpected things happening! I can't wait to read on because I die to know what happens next after Voldemort ist dead!
    You should continue write Harry Potter not Joanne!

    DB
    hdl
    Lukas
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  • From ANON - Sammie Curls on July 27, 2005
    A very interesting chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hehe, I would be giggling to if Voldemort suggested turning me over to Lucius. What a wonderful "torture" that would be. I can't believe I have to wait that long for an update! :'(

    Love Always
    Sammie Curls
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