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Reviews for The Artifact

By : Ravenkiss2000
  • From twistaddicted on September 07, 2008
    As usual with your stories they are refreshingly orginal in plot. Throughly enjoyed this one too.
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  • From twistaddicted on September 07, 2008
    Great and original start! I'm now eager to get on to the next chapters. BTW I've noticed when reading your fics that although your grammar is good and the stories are written in a professional style there are a few spelling errors and some confusion between the words 'then' and 'than. If you ever write any more stories or chapter updates and need a beta reader then contact me at jenifer1@iinet.net.au.
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  • From Katlyn on June 21, 2008
    I'm having a little trouble reading this story, largely because of this line "I nailed his pale ass..." I mean, picture Lucius Malfoy, tall, regal, snob, aristocratic, and then picture those words coming out of his mouth. Do you see my problem? I'm too busy laughing to read any more XDDD
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  • From ANON - madwriter on July 02, 2005
    Oh, YEAH!! Irrisistible Sevvy!! That's what I love!! Big thumbs up, doll-face!! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Lisn on June 18, 2005
    OMG! IF YOU DONT UPDATE I'LL COME AFTER YOU!!! :: runs after author with pitch fork in hand::
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