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Reviews for In Control

By : Qestral
  • From Trelweny on November 27, 2012
    If only it worked so well... or maybe I'm just missing even the dreams.

    Wonderfully done. It would have been interesting had Hermione delved further into why her thoughts kept coming 'round to Draco in such a way.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 22, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - nrvana06 on October 28, 2005
    I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I HOPE ITS NOT A ONE-SHOT I THINK THIS STORY HAS RGEAT POTENTIAL PLEASE!!! UPDATE
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  • From Bargle5 on August 07, 2005
    Good one, Qestral. Being that I'm not a Hermione/Draco fan, it was fun to see you use the dream as a way for Hermione to have him without having to try to come up with a believeable scenario for them to get together. Dream Draco can act any way you like without being out of character. Clever.
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  • From ANON - {~Invisible_Reviewer~} on July 01, 2005
    ^.~
    That was excellent. I've never seen Hermione portrayed that way. Good job!

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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2005
    Well written, and the dream part was quite a refreshing alternative to all the not-so-realistic fics out there. Just wanted to point out, though, that a woman is fertile only around the time she ovulates (a few days before and only for about 24 hrs after). So post-ovulation there won't be much point to her... arousal :-) (Don't mean to get so technical, but the timing _is_ a vital part of your story.)

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  • From ANON - Gentileschi on June 30, 2005
    Great chapter! Please continue!
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  • From on June 30, 2005
    With a castle full of hot guys, she has more control then I ever would have. I was just getting frusterated just reading it. Lovely piece of work.
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  • From ANON - Ayanna on June 29, 2005
    Wonderful, witty, little story. Now could we have some real action? Maybe Hermione's satisfied, but I'm not.
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  • From ANON - lrnd on June 28, 2005
    lol i enjoyed it ... will there be a sequel out of control where she basically jumps draco ...;p
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  • From ANON - Dracodea on June 28, 2005
    Great chapter, I liked how you portrayed Hermione still bossy and intelligent, even though she was horny, and not naive. =p
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