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Reviews for Debts and Decisions

By : f5e
  • From blacky on August 14, 2007
    Dizzam. I forgot about this story. It must have disappeared amongst the wave of crap of stories among this site.

    It's an even better read after reading Deathly Hallows.
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  • From erfaloth on July 31, 2007
    I loved the way you described the course of the droplets, rather than go through that usual mundane act of sex. Two thumbs up and all stars.

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  • From ri100014 on July 27, 2007
    Okay. Looking back on your previous author's notes, I just wanted to make a revision. I don't think you should try so hard to make the readers agree on this "platonic" relationship aspect of Narc/Harry's, instead I believe you should plainly display it as purely sexual; a fetish; repressed fantasy; lust. Narcissa, if there ever was a woman in the Harry Potter world, is the perfect candidate for a wife without a husband. Sure they are bonded by marriage and name, but he rarely ever touches her and never does he last longer than to satisfy his own needs. She's his trophy wife, perhaps not in the way presently thought of, as an image of sexual conquest, but as a social standing. Her family is one of the oldest bloodlines in the wizarding world, that is uncontestable, and when Lucius took her as his bride, he gained the respect of not only his fellows but his rivals. But with their union, as well, Narcissa's sex life became dormant to near vacant. She took this in stride though as the duty of a noblewoman, and with pride kept her own wantings secret. Going to a prostitute would be below her, a disgrace, and having a secret lover would be an insult to her position. Not only that but it would be dangerous given the number of eyes on her everyday. So when, while on the run, given santuary by her enemies, an unexpected event like this came along, where she, drunk and unknowing, took a lover, and her chastity impeding her, cracked. And now she can't explain why, when the boy is not only a boy, but her husband's enemy, yet she can't stop thinking, urging for their next encounter, practically feeling his press against her even when he's not there. Her sexual repression is leaking and now its practically near the breaking point. That's what I see happening and I can't wait to see the reprecussions of her loss of control.

    Till next time... adios.
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  • From randomfan86 on May 28, 2007
    good story
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2005
    Are you ever going to finish this story or update? I check by ever so often and this is getting annoying.
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  • From ANON - Ava on November 19, 2005
    I'm Harry/Narcissa OTPer convert lol.

    I hope you do finish this fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2005
    Are you going to finish this story?
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  • From ANON - Koppe on October 08, 2005
    Great story so far... would definitively love more.
    What happens when school starts? What about Draco? What will Ron and Hermione think? Could Narcissa accidently become pregnant?
    Keep up the *great* work!

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  • From ANON - Eliza on October 07, 2005
    I hope you can continue this story because I was intrigued by Harry's dark sise and he's holding his own with Narcassia. Keep going you got it right!!!
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  • From MidnightLilly on September 15, 2005
    She should get one up on him by getting pregnant with is child, then he would have to take care of her.
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  • From ANON - blacky on September 07, 2005
    Strangely enough, I dont find Harry acting this way out of character. He's always been this rather quiet, not really outspoken kind of kid, so throw him into a position like that, all this male 'meanyness' comes out. It seems something like that would happen. The only people who really piss him off are people that really just know how to piss people off. Later

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  • From ANON - blacky on September 07, 2005
    Oh yeah... With Harry talking like THAT, how can anyone fall in love?
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  • From ANON - blacky on September 06, 2005
    Even though using the actual words "penis" and "vagina" suits the scene since its practically a relationship straight out of a porno film, it was weird. Poor Ginny.. If she ever catches wind of this.. Ooooo... Lookin good so far!
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  • From ANON - Artemis on September 06, 2005
    I wouldn't mind if you included Ginny a bit.... but please, no threesome!
    I think it would also be very, very funny - and scandalous - if Narcissa got pregnant with Harry's kid! I'd LOVE to see the expression on Draco's face, LOL. Not to mention what the rest of the wizarding world would say if that came out... it would be wonderful :D :D :D
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  • From ANON - Citan on September 04, 2005
    This fic is great man...hope you can finish it. The best het Harry/not Hr or G at least. Most(if not all) good Harry/other than G/Hr are abandoned. This damn site has 99% slash fics... Does it have to be Ginny for that rescue vehicle... i hate H/G...
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