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Reviews for My Unintended

By : sageofsin
  • From Severus1snape on August 28, 2015
    aaargh come on, evil you for stopping there, this was so bloody funny
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  • From on August 06, 2009
    Good story. You should make a sequel or something yeah???
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  • From ANON - kimmie-jean on January 23, 2006
    love it update
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  • From ANON - sethian on January 17, 2006
    You should post another chapter for it is quite a good story In my opinion. :)
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  • From ANON - Heather on January 10, 2006
    Damn I want more...what happens? Please let me know when you update. Lotslove18@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Eci_frog on January 04, 2006
    I loved it. Just wished it were more.
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  • From ANON - Nitasha (nitashasarin@hotmail.com) on December 09, 2005
    A bit confusing as you never really described or indicated what the result of the chocolates really was. Lucius finds Harry attractive but what happens when the potion wears off? Did you mean that Lucius already found Harry attractive and the potion just gave him a kick in the right direction and hence no further explanation towards the chocolates?

    Sorry if I confused you.
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  • From ANON - Briarrows69 on December 09, 2005
    Sequel? Second chapter? Maybe?
    It's great as a one shot, but it would be interesting not to mention angsty when Harry finds out that Lucius ate the chocolate...and besides, I want a declaration of love, dammit!
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  • From ANON - lusiki on December 09, 2005
    is there more to be expected?????
    It was great , but a second chapter of nice lucius harry is allways a pleasure!!!! ^__^!
    Lucius
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  • From ANON - zer0 on December 07, 2005
    lol lol lol ...what a great fic..jus please please continue}!!!! don
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  • From ANON - Tyrisha on December 07, 2005
    mwhahahahahahahah. that was too fabulous. so great. unintended indeed. but hey, it worked! and fred and george's comments were outrageous as always
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  • From ANON - bella on December 07, 2005
    Lovely little fic! Could you consider writing a sequel? Maybe a X-mas scene? and more HP/LM smut.... =) Good work! LOved the ending...
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  • From ANON - Akume on December 06, 2005
    Oh that was just too much. ~laughs uncontrollably~ I loved the last bit with the wailer. Anyway, I hope you add another chapter to this splendid story. There's just so much you can do, but that just me wanting to read more smut between Lucius and Harry. Thanks again.
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on December 06, 2005
    ^^ I LOVED IT!!
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  • From ANON - ice owl on December 06, 2005
    That was so cute! You and your chocolates was almost as inspired as fragonknight01's description of Lucius begging lemon drops.
    Loved the Christmas expectations!!!
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