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Reviews for Water

By : kissherdraco
  • From ANON - sal05 on December 10, 2005
    Great story! One of the best I read and a very long time. You make thing seem so real, and you just don't with one point of view, which is great I love. And this is the first time I'm seeing Harry as well... how Ron would act, which is diff. but great too, everything is I can just go on and on how much I'm loving your story, but I'm not I think this is enough for now. Just keep up the great work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - savysavestheday on December 10, 2005
    This is good, really really good! Most of the stories here are rushed and well, not detailed at all... but this I love. Keep up the excellent work!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fiona on December 10, 2005
    i have to say i don't really make comments on writing just the story concept but you have that something that i have found many want to be writers long for. i come to this site for the excitment in storyline but i often find a story that doesn't make to much sense and leave out details that could come in handy for the reader to understand the story more or bore the reader with way too much detail. detail is nice but a lot of people put to much into it and not focus on the acual story at hand. i also am not a big fan of "Like that would happens" reviews reviewers leave when a story doesn't go the way they think JK would have written it (what would be the point of fanfiction then?) but i do have to say i could accually see this. it's believable, well leaving out book six of course, unless it takes place after that in which i am sorry. lol but since i have bored you to death the point is this is fantastic, well written and i love the storyline, great job and i do hope to see another chapter up soon!
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  • From ANON - Know-it-all on December 10, 2005
    WOW. That's all I can say. I really don't like the cliche head boy/girl fics, but this one has so much hatred and raw emotion, I really loved it! Especially that kiss scene! How hot! I can hardly wait until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Provocateur on December 09, 2005
    This story is very captivating in its intensity, and I am definitely looking forward to seeing how things will unfold. My one very minor complaint has to do with your formatting. Your dialogue is smushed together and surrounded by expository sentences. There's nothing wrong with adding exposition to dialogue, but when there are no linebreaks it can become a little confusing and sometimes the reader may lose track of who is speaking.

    That's just a minor problem in an otherwise very well-written, dramatic, and compelling story.
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  • From ANON - Bree on December 09, 2005
    Okay I want to see where this is going but I'm scared at the same time. Is this gonna be some sick story in which Hermoine gets f'd over? Geez I don't know if I can handle that. So far this is brilliant but like I said I'm scared to read more... I hate thinking that Malfoy could break her, when it should be the other way around. Either way this is a great story, and even if it doesn't work out the cheesy way that I would like it is still a great story.
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  • From ANON - Reembrand on December 09, 2005
    Please continue. This story has so much potential.
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  • From ANON - Lulu on December 09, 2005
    OMG! That was hot! YUMMY, YUMMY, YUMMY. More Please...
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  • From ANON - WilliW on December 09, 2005
    mh... Not bad this side of Draco. I'm quite curious about how this is going to develop- ^^

    write more, please!
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  • From ANON - Iio on December 09, 2005
    Love it!
    Keep it up
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  • From ANON - Laurachan on December 09, 2005
    very interesting.... and angsty ^^
    I'm intrigued, please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on December 09, 2005
    That was really good!
    Update soon please!
    I really like the plot!
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  • From ANON - 2bfoundwanting on December 09, 2005
    This story is simply amazing. You have created an entire world out of the Harry Potter world. The characters are more real and more interesting and simply amazing. The story is realy, the emotions are real.. i even felt them sometimes. I cant get over how wonderful your Hermione and Draco are. Please please please continue and update quickly. This is fast becoming my favorite story and i cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Lrnd on December 09, 2005
    Super hot!1
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2005
    wow. this story is so intense, and i'm loving every word of it. this is by far my favourite fic on this site, and i've been holding my breath as i read every word! i love love love the way you have made the characters so real. i love the jealous, over-protective harry. i love the violent, angry draco, and i think your hermione is absolutely perfect. i can't wait for an update, and hope you write chapter 4 very soon. this is killing me! that scene was phenomenal! my heart is still racing!!!! you must write more... you must! wow. i wish there were more fics like this out there... i also hope you have more stories! i'm going to go check right now :)


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