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Reviews for Inside the Blackest Heart (Edit, Not Update)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - SL on September 17, 2014
    Ch 13: Intriguing story so far! Sometimes (not just in Ch 13) it is unclear whether the text is describing how Hermione feels/thinks, or it is third-party narration for the benefit of the readers. For example,
    "...She had quite an aptitude for spell enhancement and development. Actually, this was the capacity Albus intended to use her for. ..."
    It is unclear whether Hermione was aware that Albus intended to use her for spell development: in other words, somewhat aware of Albus' scheme; or it is merely thiry-party narration for the readers to understand Albus' scheme.
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  • From jddammann on February 23, 2009
    Wonderful story, I'm going for the first of the epilogues! Thanks for the great story!
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  • From ANON - ExperimentalMe on January 20, 2009
    I love your dark Snape! Although by chapter 30, Hermione was becoming too omnipotent so I was losing interest in the story. However, in chapter 31, you deftly inserted new tension by having Snape tell Hermione in no uncertain terms that he did not welcome any romantic feelings from Hermione. Now I can look forward to Hermione's struggle to overcome Snape's nature (that he is evil and without emotions of love/kindness). I do love the kinkiness of your lemons too.


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  • From kitten224 on September 11, 2008
    haha sweet I love stories where where Hermione turns into a powerful Witch and I liked the alternate ending very much x33 I hope yo find more stories like this so I will probably be looking in your stories No doubt you have some delicious ones in there till then

    (Kitten)
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  • From ANON - Lilly on August 27, 2007
    The alternate ending leaves me breathless and with just two things to say:
    First: nobody can write lemons like you!!!
    Second: excuse me now, I have to change my knickers *gg*
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 27, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Andrea on July 26, 2007
    OH MY GOD. that was HOT. loved it. my mission is now to find more of your stories and hope to hell that they are as AMAZINGLY WONDERFUL as this one. it took me a couple days to finish it, but damn, it was worth it. and I'm very glad that you added the alternate ending.
    have a wonderful time writing!!
    Andy
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  • From Alabaster on April 14, 2007
    i'm not sure how i missed this story but I did.. and I'm so sorry I didnt read it before.. it was.. raunchy, hot, intense, amazing and OH BOY! lol Great work!
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  • From SnapesSweetheart on February 15, 2007
    wow that was hot. I read all the chapters in one sitting because I couldn't step away I also liked the way you ended it. I don't think it would have been the same for Snape to all of a sudden declare his love for her. Great Job!!
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  • From WitchatHeart77 on January 27, 2007
    I'm tryig to figure out how exactly you do that which you do. Every story I've read of yours is explicit, designed, and powerful. I saw in one author note that you were going to end the story somewhere in the teens. I am so very grateful you did not. How you made Dumbledore evil and selfish...that was pure genius. It was extremely believable. I am so very impressed with this. I am going to go look over your reviews for a friend of mine that I know has read your work before and see if she has read this. I think she will enjoy this immensely and since she is an avid supporter of mine, I find I need to deliver her a rather delicious treat. Lucius, Hermione, and Severus all together...Oh yes, she will be very pleased.

    Again, thank you so much for developing your creativity to a point that is unparalleled in my opinion.

    WickedWitch
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  • From WitchatHeart77 on January 27, 2007
    Ch49 OMG! HAHAHAHA! Oh, poor Severus! Hopefully that disciplined nature of his will make this ruse work! Oh goody!
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  • From WitchatHeart77 on January 27, 2007
    Sorry that was for chapter um...i don't know.. Hermione's first night at Voldemort's. She said good night, severus said fuck you... hahahahaha!
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  • From WitchatHeart77 on January 27, 2007
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on December 23, 2006
    Chapter 35

    YES! Hermione is brilliant! Snape is such an ass, and I am glad she is being a bitch!
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  • From ANON - Chavela on December 23, 2006
    Chapter 17

    This I like. Thank the gods something good is happening.

    This Primordial thing is kick ass!

    Awesome stuff there.
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