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Reviews for During the holiday

By : yaoiboydaisuke
  • From JaceDamian23 on October 10, 2008
    it was good
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  • From DaOnleeSam on December 24, 2005
    Nice. I liked.
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  • From ANON - johntheheavy on December 21, 2005
    nice fic you've got there! Real god but It was over too quickly! You's got's potential me thinks!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2005
    the begining of this story was really good but then during the middle is started getting kind of week and the end just wasnt good. I think it would have been better with more details in the story.
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  • From ANON - pixi on December 21, 2005
    What you have here is the bare bones of a story. A decent outline. But you need to pad things out, put in more details. You're too rushed and the way the characters speak isn't quite right. Keep trying.
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  • From ANON - angel on December 21, 2005
    i really really liked your story and i wised you had gone on with it ...please keep up the great work .. in till next time

    angel
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  • From ANON - Mami Chula on December 21, 2005
    WOW PERSON. THIS WAS CRAZY. I LIKE IT. YOU GOT THE STORY PART DOWN REALLY GOOD. YOU SHOULD DO MORE STRAIGHT STUFF. KEEP GOING!
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