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Reviews for Midnight's Dawning

By : KagetsuAsame
  • From Niharana on April 07, 2008
    interesting :)
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on January 20, 2008
    Oh yeah! I forgot to ask. Is there going to be a pairing soon in the future of the story?
    I can't wait to see who you're going to pair Harry with. I'd personally like for it to be
    either Draco or Blaise. Maybe Blaise. I've never read a Harry/Blaise fic before. What will
    it be oh Talented One. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on January 20, 2008
    You can't end it like this >(! I love it soo much!
    I can't wait to read what happens next! And I'm sorry
    your animals died. I know how how that feels.
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on January 19, 2008
    Oooh, I loved it! It's so interesting, and I'm only on ch. 1.

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  • From SlythRaven on October 23, 2007
    Will Aurel and Nic have a relationship? Because I think they'd be perfect for each other. And as for Aurel's stance... I think he should stay neutral for the most part. Away from Dumble's manipulations
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  • From alma on October 18, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From Jan on October 18, 2007
    Can't wait for chapter 14, please update soon. ^_^
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  • From Heksy on October 18, 2007
    Breathlessly I read all the chapters in one go.
    Yopu have a wonderful way of making the passing of time flow
    into each other seemlessly.
    I can't wait to find out what will happen next.
    By the way...the are some spelling mistakes in the last two chapters, but nothing big.
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  • From kati on September 10, 2007
    This is written in a way that is easy to follow, but it is also a bit emotionless. Its like a recipe being read, not people's feelings and thoughts. Perhaps you could try to make it a bit more personal? You could do this in many ways, but the easiest is to have one character's POV, so they would talk in the first person. This would also give you the opportunity to express themselves. You could also reconstruct your sentences to make them more envolved. This is an excellent and very enjoyable story, but it is lacking in a certain 'fire', or 'drive' that pulls the reader in. Harry also seems very OOC, but that can be overlooked when you see the high standards of the rest if the story. I was a little bit disapointed to see you went with the whole chliche 'mating season' or 'going into heat' thing, that you see a lot of. I was hoping a proper relationship was going to develop. I hate impersonal sex, it just isn't interesting. Anyway, I hope this doesn't come off the wrong way (cause I'm not being mean, honest! ^_^) and that you find this helpful in some way!
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  • From ANON - random reviewer on June 18, 2007
    I love your story, but I do feel the need to be a bit of a harsh critic. It just.. it seemed you got lazy with your work, skipping all of those years and giving up only a few details, leaving us to wounder wtf is going on otherwise. I do suggest you rethink your decision and at least skip over those few years you blatantly passed over. I know I'm not the only one who would appreciate not being gypped of a good story.
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  • From Vittani on June 13, 2007
    Hhhhmmmmmmmm the plot thickens. Cool chapter, dont worry other commitments come first, if people dont understand that then ignore them. Good chapter cant wait for the next one.
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  • From Selera on June 13, 2007
    Wish I had seen this sooner. It is a really nice story. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - chloe on June 13, 2007
    this is really good hope to see another chapter
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  • From Lucifoy on June 13, 2007
    i like this fic, its not the usual poor-boy-who-lived, i hope you to upload soon.
    although it is interesting its a bit.. dry, not much, i think i
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  • From Kailael on June 12, 2007
    You definitely left me wondering what dumbledore is up to and why snape is prowling about. i'm glad you updated and eagerly await your next update =)Good work =)
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