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Reviews for Spring Heat

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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 20, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From blessedcurse5659 on July 10, 2006
    corrected any errors that i found
    great story tho


    Draco Malfoy was pissed and boy do I mean pissed.
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  • From on July 09, 2006
    Why would she cry in pain while being clitmassaged? I doubt that it would hurt even if one was to touch it with little force. It's a different story if Draco really tried to rub it _off_ but normally it shouldn't be painful regardless how hard it's being massaged.
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  • From Causticsarcasm on July 02, 2006
    Hey :)

    Do you have a beta? If you do not, I would suggest you consider one. You have no paragraphs and there are little mistakes through the writing. Also, since it is not a pwp, consider slowing them down a bit unless this is the entire point of your story. A sex scene doesn
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