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Reviews for Walking the Gray Line ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Shellnet on October 08, 2019

     Damn that ending I don't know did you do a sequel oh my I can't believe this  all the darkest wizards are linked to Dumbledore so I guess that was right 


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  • From nightbloodrose on September 28, 2012
    That was absolutely amazing! As usual for your stories. I'm curious how far Bara will get before the others at Hogwarts notice or if theyll notice at all? Great story :)
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  • From ANON - Summer Leah on February 28, 2010
    Man--you ALWAYS have to end your stories with an opening for a sequel, don't you? Not that I'm complaining ;o) I'd love to read the sequel to this, and several other of your stories.
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  • From ANON - Summer Leah on February 27, 2010
    I want a Wicked Wheezer!!!!!!!!!!
    Life's tough when you're a horny virgin.
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  • From TriniMinx on December 20, 2009
    holy cow!
    wow that was one hell of a story Figgy. Where do you come up with this stuff. You should really write original novels. No, seriously, I mean it. You can base your characters on what you see Sev & Herms as, but holy moly in a box woman.
    And Bara...well, now, that IS interesting.

    Happy Holidays Figgy! :)
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  • From TriniMinx on December 20, 2009
    Just read ch9...holy hell, wow. lol
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  • From katiekrm on May 04, 2009
    I LOVE Minerva. Taunt away! You come up with the best OCs. I love Bara. I loved the part you wrote about Albus being brave and Bara being brave, too. He's already so endearing. And now Albus is saving his life in more ways than one. Sweet Albus. I hope Hermione and Severus release the lost souls before Albus kills them.
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  • From katiekrm on May 03, 2009

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  • From ANON - WilliamSpike on February 19, 2009
    When I was living in San Diego in 1985, the first chair violin of the San Diego Symphony Orchestra bought a Strad. I believe the deal was brokered in Manhattan, and he went there to get the Strad. This was front-page in the SD newspapers. He would not reveal what the Strad cost, but he did admit that the financing on the Stard ran for 100 years.
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  • From smmz79 on August 17, 2008
    HAHAHA OMG that was great..... i can just imagine the look on his when his face turned into fabios..... and the fact that hermione could reverse the spell from a distance was hysterical she did not have to wait till the end of work she could have done it at anytime... oh is she ever gonna get it...
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  • From smmz79 on August 17, 2008
    hmm this seems interesting... that is what i always love about your stories they are so unique and exciting funny romantic and hot!!!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 11, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From solisflos on July 27, 2008
    Effing amazing as usual!
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  • From sherrithewriter on February 17, 2008
    What a tremendous story! Wow! I loved it -- there were so many layers. I would have liked to have known if HG/SS had children, but tne ending with Bara was certainly a cliffhanger. Will there be a sequel? The characters in this story were so well-drawn. Your writing is fantastic!
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  • From ANON - browneyes2yu on November 26, 2007
    You dont have to take me seriously, but I just like to vent my emotions on paper or with words anyway and I remember the first time I read this story I wanted to write a comment but didnt and now I have to do it. I really really commiserate with Hermione on Harry case and it makes me sooooo mad that Harry didnt have any expectations of Ginny and that Ginny apparently didnt love Harry that much...I guess she loved him, but I think it was more of an adolsecent love and I always felt that she was more infatuated with the idea of Harry as the Boy-Who-Lived, the Hero, the Saviour...I mean she loved him but not enough apparently as she was able to move on and HOW to move on at that...Hermione on the other hand...man, that's a real friend right there, indeed no one expected her to stay by Harry's side and no one would have blamed her had she left him alone either, but she didnt because she loved him truly (in non-physical sense) and was willing to risk anything for him...that is why she finally decided to "sell" her standards and her body...Harry could be more appreciative instead of selfish and ungrateful about it...I mean he thanked her but then when the Ginny situation arose he blew it in her face...I really didn't like him there and then...Yeah, easy for him to judge Hermione (who gave him his life back at so much cost and stayed by his side true and loyal through all the hard times, while Ginny forgot or tried to forget and moved on, and compare situations which are not comparable by the way, since Ginny just threw herself into sexual explorations, enjoying herself with many wizards and Gail (as episode in Cedric's Sypmosium showed), while Hermione was sort of forced into patronage agreement with Severus because of her utlimate desire and willingness to help Harry and do anything at all to restore him. Yeah, she enjoyed Severus' attentions later on, but not before she consciously entered into agreement not knowing how he will treat her but braving her fears and abandoning her principles, all for Harry. I think he should have chosen her over Ginny any day, Ginny was so fast to forget her past and "love" Harry again and Harry too chose Ginny so fast over Hermione and her objections that it made me spitting mad and want to throttle him and that little hussy (I always wanted to say that phrase ^-^* And it made me mad that Hermione felt bad about her words later on and her "loss of friendship" with Harry, she told nothing but the truth and he should be ashamed, not her. I know how the story will develop later on and blah, blah, blah...but I am just so mad right now that I HAD to vent my feelings....I never liked Ginny much period. but at this point I really dont like Harry much either...
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