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Reviews for The Centre of the World

By : CiraArana
  • From ANON - Firewings133 on November 06, 2012
    Excellent story with sparse sentences full of feelings. Will look for your other stories.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 14, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Rumpelyssa on October 07, 2006
    Wow! That was beautiful! I have tears in my eyes from that. I heard the voices, I felt like I was there! This story shall remain in my favourites. Is there going to be more? I would so like a follow up!
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  • From ANON - Donavon on September 28, 2006
    Oh I like it, very much. What a high tensioned tempatured chapter. I didn't just like it, I loved it!! More soon please. Best wishes.
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  • From SorceressFujin on September 28, 2006
    Excellent! I hope you dont stop there, that was fantastic!
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  • From ANON - reviewer on September 28, 2006
    Your story shines brightly like a new star on this website where most other stories portraying this ship have glaring grammatical errors, trite characterization, incoherent and often disorganized paragraphs and plot sequences, and very bad descriptions of the interactions between Snape and Hermione. Thank you for such a wonderful little piece that gives me hope that there are still a few new authors out there who can actually write something of worth. I would suggest you submit this story to one of the other SS/HG archives out there as well...such as Ashwinder or the Petulant Poetress. Looking forward to more of your work in the future!
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  • From ANON - nessie on September 28, 2006
    continue it enough to see how he asks the question, her responce and everyones reaction. I loved it and I want to know what happons next.

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  • From ANON - lisa on September 28, 2006
    aww i liked it alot. and what was the question he wanted to ask? are u continuing? i am curious now. good job.
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  • From ANON - blackcat on September 27, 2006
    What a lovely story. You have a lovely writing style.Reading the story I had feelings of peace and dignity. It felt quite spiritual. Your English is excellent. It is difficult to believe that it is not your first language.
    Please continue to write

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