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Reviews for Intrusion

By : ccrawley
  • From luvhp on August 08, 2007
    Oh how sad, Poor Hermione being abused to final conceive his child. Good story.
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 13, 2007
    Ch 1: Gulp! Yup, dark. I haven't read a Voldemort/Hermione fic before (a V/H virgin, LOL!) but I can see that this pairing might have some attractions to it if one likes angst to the nth degree - and sometimes I do.

    I guess I would like to know if Hermione ever gets away, but this is good as a one-shot also. Voldemort is completely irredeemable, the Death Eaters are vicious, and Hermione has only death to release her from her torture, but it sounds like she'd rather live, no matter what. So is my favorite blondie in with the crowd, taunting Hermione from the sidelines? Maybe I'd rather not know. I could see the senior Crabbe and Goyle and Bellatrix urging on Voldemort, but Malfoy would more likely be quietly standing nearby, coldly passing Voldie the knife.

    Fascinating, disturbing window into the future if Voldemort won. Thanks for the story!
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  • From LilyLady on January 08, 2007
    :'(
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  • From ANON - amazed on December 04, 2006
    no just dont do it
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  • From ANON - Koppe on November 13, 2006
    Short and dark. Wouldn't mind a sequel though, about her pregnancy, and about her and the child.
    (There really ought to be more Hermione&Lord Voldemort/Tom Riddle stories here...)

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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on October 31, 2006
    Somehow, I like this.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on October 30, 2006
    This was very dark, but I liked it! Well done!
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  • From ANON - knutts on October 29, 2006
    good beginning. i hope you continue, her being pregnant by Voldemort opens the door to a multitude of possible story lines.


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