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By : dmnchld13
  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on February 24, 2008
    how bout they abuse some slaves?
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  • From JaceDamian23 on October 15, 2007





    In the three years since they had graduated from Hogwarts, things had changed dramatically. Voldemort, much to everyone's surprise, had won the war, and because of Draco's help in accomplishing that, Voldemort had spared Ron while Hermione had been thrown into slavery along with the others that had fought along side the defeated Harry Potter.

    In their seventh year, Ron had found himself attracted to the blonde wizard, but despite being scared of those feelings, he had embraced them. He had been the one to make the first move on Draco, but after that, it was Draco that had taken charge. Oh, he never told anyone about his feelings for the blonde Death Eater, neither of them wanting to let anyone in on their relationship.

    After graduation, Draco had tried to persuade him into moving their relationship to the next step, but Ron had wanted to wait until the war had ended so that they wouldn't have to worry about complications. After all, they were fighting on opposite sides. Ron wasn't about to allow himself to feel too deeply for him in case he lost him.

    A year after graduation, the war had begun and within the next year, both sides had lost several fighters, then the battle had ended on the same day in which it had begun. Draco had stood side by side with Voldemort as his second hand as they both had looked at the fallen body of Harry Potter. Ron had held Harry and had shed tears for the man he had called a brother, but before Ron had known what happened, Harry's body had vanished and he was locked inside a cell with Hermione, and their fellow survivors.

    For almost a year, they had stayed in there then much to their surprise, Draco had joined them and had spared Ron's life. Ron, of course, had struggled because he didn't want to leave Hermione alone, but Draco had been convincing. Since his freedom from the cell, more things had changed for the red-haired Weasley.

    Life had started to go back to normal as if the war had never happened. Hogwarts was reopened with a new headmaster, Snape was now involved with both Potions and DADA teachings, and Draco had become Snape's apprentice in Potions while Ron had been allowed to become involved with Quidditch. When he had been given the choice to either stay by Draco's side or return to the others as a slave, despite how much he had cared for and loved Hermione, his love for Draco had become even deeper. It was something he couldn't lose.


    i loved that wholeeeeee part. yes its long. so sorry lol. felt bad for mione...so glad draco got ron saved..he has alife now. loved how they dated even before the war..kind of weird though. ron was harry's second...and draco was the dark lords second lol.......and ron was in a cell for a year..sucks but glad he got out


    Draco smirked a little darker as he watched Ron, licking his lips in delight.

    that is impossiable cuz he has a gag in his mouth lol

    Things like 'what would Harry say if he could see you begging me to fuck you?

    thats mean..i mean rons ur bf and u love him and harry was rons besty and he's dead...heartless draco


    Ron struggled against the restraints, his breathing becoming harder. "Will you fuck me already, Malfoy?"

    lol. kinky though ron was a virgin...so cruel of draco to not prepare him..evenn if he's being punished






    If you were gentle, it wouldn't be you."

    Draco lifted his eyebrow and tilted his head, then smirked. "So you like it rough, huh?"

    Ron blushed then cleared his throat, moving his eyes from Draco's face and nodded just a little. "I do, yes."

    Draco chuckled darkly and nipped at his neck. "Well, well, well. The lone Weasel likes to be dominated."

    "You made me that way, ferret face," Ron replied with a dark glare.

    Draco looked at him and gave him a dark and somewhat sinister smile. "Damn right I did, Weasel, and don't forget who you belong to," he growled before he crushed his lips against his for the hundredth time that night.

    Ron moaned and shivered as he returned the kiss, his eyes shut tight. He pulled back from the kiss and breathed heavily against Draco's lips, his body completely flushed. "I can't forget who I belong to, Draco."


    lmfao soo true


    As they slept, they were both unaware of the figure that had floated into the room and smiled, his red eyes watching them as they slept.

    Voldemort tilted his head then smiled. He turned and vanished from the room, having only one thought in his mind: his children were beautiful.

    wow that ending...wow so unexpected. he kept on smiling and loving them like his kids...wow .



    i loved the story honey.it was hot and loved that voldy won...different


    angela
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  • From Annie on January 18, 2007
    Wow. Just wow. I don't know what else to say. I love how you let Voldemort to win and allowed Draco to keep Ron as a pet. Even though I think Ron is a bit OOC, I absolutely loved how your Draco turned out to be. His domination and adoration was combined very carefully, and I just loved it. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Lu on December 14, 2006
    i love it....your a frostin' writen
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2006
    wow this is great im so glad someone decided to write a ron/draco fic!
    great work! poor hermione though
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  • From ANON - plasma-marionette on December 12, 2006
    yeah! finally some ron/draco action around here. I loved Draco, he was wonderfully IC. Voldemort was fine too, and I liked how you ended the whole thing. Ron's character was a bit off to me though, especially when he didn't care about Harry or Hermione, but I guess it should be alright since Draco/Ron isn't easy to write.

    It was interesting. :D
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