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Reviews for A Turn for the Better

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Deeharmonic on December 30, 2020

    RIP you wonderful woman, author and I bet one heck of a friend. 


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  • From Deeharmonic on December 30, 2020

    Hello, I had to create an account to leave my review but your writing is so fabulous, it needed to be said. I loved this story and read it all in about a week. Thank you for this amazing work!


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  • From ANON - Rose on December 17, 2015
    Chapter 31.
    Snape was like, "dude i'm sorry the thing broke.. But can you just look at my yearly budget right now" ahahahahahahahahaha! (Sorry I can't move on beyond that part. Made me so happy!) :)
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  • From Trelweny on May 19, 2013
    Your best Severus/Hermione story yet. I loved their interaction and the plot stemming from time travel complete with explained time paradox... simply delightful. Severus being free of both masters was terrific. Did he chose to apply for Hogwarts on the hope of finding Hermione? Otherwise I can't fathom why he would have.
    It was wonderful to see so much of Luna and even Neville. They more often than not don't get enough time. Plus you did wonderful with Luna. I love how you played up both her eccentricity and her intelligence -trailing her hands to find secrets was pure brilliance.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From Ms_Figg on January 02, 2009
    morganabythesea:

    You have to keep in mind that the Hermione of this timeline hasn't experienced much, and her remembrances of her alternate timeline is shadowy. But she feels discontent and a desire for more. Academically, she is still quite formidable, but lacks in application. She's feeling it now. The need to do something more real, physical. Challenging. Looking at her rather dull life, it does seem stupid to take such risks, but that's the problem with paradox. Trying to adjust who she is to who she was in a way that's satisfying. Both aspects are real to her. Just my opinion though. :)


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  • From jddammann on January 02, 2009
    The most brilliant witch of her age, I don't think so. The story is wonderful beyond Hermione's need to focus on something stupid after all she had learned in her previous timeline.
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  • From Moyra on November 18, 2008
    Chap 52 + 53:
    That was one of the best lemons you've written, Ms_Figg. The desire, the passion, the lust, the love, the connection between them, everyone getting their turn with being in control - simply fantastic.

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  • From miamadwyn on November 12, 2008
    Ah, such a fun ride through this story. And educational, as promised!
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  • From ANON - jan on November 12, 2008
    hi miss figg i dont usually review cos i never know what to say , but after reading another of your delicious stories i just felt i had to say how totally wonderful your writing skills are . All the very best to you and yours from an adoring miss figg fan, long live the severus /hermione ship and long live your wonderful writing. Have you ever thought of taking this up professionally your as good as ms rowling if not better, in my humble opinion anyway take care jan xx
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  • From ANON - HeavenLeighMalfoy on November 12, 2008
    I DEMAND a sequel!

    This was bloody brilliant! I zoomed through it in two days (read at work, read at home) and I loved it.

    I only wish that we had been able to see how the students of Hogwarts treated little Ms. Granger. Especially since she would have known the 2nd through 7th years vaguely, then when she married him, she would have known the 5th through 7th years.

    Thanks for writing!

    SEQUEL!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ri-chan on November 11, 2008
    The end!!!....Pufff...as always the best...love it to pieces...
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  • From voraciousreader on November 11, 2008
    TWO Chapters! Wonderful! I love how you created such a carefully crafted alternative to the HP universe without Voldemort throughout the entire story. It was beautifully consistent, yet completely grounded in the original. The differences in the characters' lives and motivations, now that they weren't fighting for their lives at every turn, were well thought out. You've never disappointed me yet, even if I am fairly new here.
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  • From on November 11, 2008
    I'm smiling. You took your incredible one shot and grew it into a very enjoyable chaptered story. Clever, fun and even at time scary. I had a great time reading. Thanks!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 11, 2008
    Totally awsome story. I really enjoyed it.
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