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Reviews for A Ritual of Courtship

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From sentineljandb2 on February 25, 2007
    Wow I am starting to love all the slithering men. I can
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 25, 2007
    Chapter 1: I know Hermione loved Ron, but it's so sad, her crying for him every night for ten years.

    Why did Mrs. Johnson know to call Hermione Mrs. Weasley when you said no one knew? I'm confused.

    Question of semantics - is the British English term 'draw' for the drawers in a bureau? I've seen this a couple of times and wondered. (The American term is drawer.) I'm always curious about the differences between the two languages. At times I catch myself spelling words the British way and have to fix it. I decided long ago to just stick with my American spellings even though the story takes place in England. I wouldn't be able to do everything correctly, including idioms and different terms for the same thing (like 'ladders' in a stocking instead of a 'run') so I'm staying with what I know.


    So Rudi is stinking rich? I didn't know their family had so much money.

    Severus and Ginny seem so relaxed and settled and their little 'discussion' was snarky while showing their solidarity as a couple. and I never cared about the age difference with Lucius and Hermione. The age difference between Rudi and Hermione is just as unimportant to me seeing as how the magical people live so much longer than Muggles.

    Hermione keeps the secret of her marriage ten years, then tells the entire magical community in one swoop? Hmmm.

    But Snape as matchmaker was terrific. He seemed a natural for the job, methodical, sneaky, and he knows both people well. His little ointment trick worked. I hope he doesn't get booed for his performance with his son. Where did the name Jolyon come from?

    I wonder where Hemrmione and Rudi go from here?
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  • From idancer on February 24, 2007
    That's so sad for both of them, but i'm hooked onto the story. Can't wait to read more. Upsate soon. :)
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  • From Emmylovedraco on February 24, 2007
    I like it now come on update soon, Please now'
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  • From on February 23, 2007
    Very interesting. I like it!

    Looking forward to the next chapter,
    Lexy
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  • From ANON - snapeslave on February 22, 2007
    oh this is so good...i love it...i love this particular ship...i have been following the other 2 fics in this ship on here...they are also very good just takes a while for them to update...i hope you update a little faster...this story has me hooked...and i think that its deliciously hilarious that sev is playing matchmaker...keep up the good work...looking forward to the next chapters...take care...
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  • From angelnomiko on February 22, 2007
    wow ... that was a great start a little sad ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ExperienceMyDreams on February 22, 2007
    I like it keep going... It's different.
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  • From ANON - auntbecky on February 22, 2007
    I really found this story entertaining. I have to agree with you. The idea of Severus playing matchmaker is funn. It suits his Slytherin nature, I think. Anyway, I sure hope you're planning on continuing.
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