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Reviews for Completely Unexpected

By : Inell
  • From JRTaylor on April 11, 2020

    Fuuuuuuuckkkkk! MORE PLEASE!


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  • From MacPhisto on June 01, 2010
    great stuff!

    can't imagine what she'd imagine being with Bellatrix or Molly would be like
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  • From RavenTiger on December 29, 2008
    This was a hot PWP. Good job. Peace.
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  • From CryingCinderella on August 04, 2007
    Very lovely indeed. Though I do feel you missed a crucial female in the matter. How could you have a story about experimental lesbians and not include Madam Hooch? *snort* Though I often pretend she's straight for my musings, the woman is as queer as a three pound note. Your story, back to it, was well crafted, and highly entertaining. I did have a bit of trouble believing that Hermione had not been exposed to the computer before, however, I do suppose it makes sense if you're implying that they didn't get it until she was sixteen or seventeen, or some such.

    I'm wondering, if in your descriptions of these pictures, did you try surfing for actual images just to see how easy it was? I mean obviously some of them were made up to fit the characters, but, I find sometimes when I'm writing, I end up doing some of the things that the characters are doing, just to see what it's like, so I was wondering if perhaps you did.

    I also enjoyed the built progression and liked that it started with Luna. Though I'm not sure ending with Lavender and Parvati was as climactic as it could have been. Though the bit with Tonks was wonderful. Narcissa too. :)

    I liked it very much. Congratulations on a fic. well written. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2007
    Interesting... Very very good.
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  • From sashaphillips on June 06, 2007
    WOW. I usually am not into femmeslash but you did an AMAZING job.
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  • From Hermyone on June 03, 2007
    Wow, very hot. I hope theres some real action to come between this bunch. :)
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