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Reviews for The Black Riddle

By : Extraho
  • From Shadi88 on April 22, 2008
    I like the story and don't think it needs any changing except for some grammer, but other than that it's wonderful.
    Hope you get back to this fic soon. Best of luck and good wishes to you.
    Butterfly Beauty
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  • From ANON - Jaylynn on October 28, 2007
    What a naughty kitty...its something my cat would do, especially since I think he hates my computer anyway and always tries to sit between me and it when I am on it. Sorry about the lack of available chargers around and I look forward to more when you can post again.
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  • From Wilder on October 22, 2007
    Ya! i love this story! Go Jack! and i have to say that your Bella is my absolute favorite version i have ever read, and i have read alot! :glomp: can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From LunaSimi on October 05, 2007
    *bawls T_T* i wanna new chapter to read!! It was just getting good!!! *whaaaaaa T.T*

    =^_^=
    Tigeress
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  • From Wilder on September 04, 2007
    *whimper* oh, i want to cry, i know he is just missunderstanding but it is still so perfectly angsty... Bella you better whip him around quick, ease his worries cause that power guy thinks you don't want him!! dang your version of Jack Sparrow blows all others out of the water! i love it! *huggles*
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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on September 03, 2007
    I look everyday to see if this is updated and then...and then you pull this. Please please please and another please update soon and make her say yes!
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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on August 24, 2007
    yay! I am glad you are only changing jack for a few days. I look forward to more.
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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on August 19, 2007
    Yes its short but it has some interesting info in it. I will be looking worward to more as always.
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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on August 04, 2007
    But...But ...but I like jack the way he was ( goes to pout in a corner). Besides that it was a great chapter and as alway I look forward to more.
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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on July 27, 2007
    Its good but you ended up posting the last chapter twice. Look forward to more.
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  • From angelnomiko on July 22, 2007
    wow that was great and go bella .... please update soon i would love to read more ..

    angel
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  • From angelnomiko on July 22, 2007
    that was great ... and i love how they get along ... please update soon i would love to read more .. alter for now

    angel
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  • From chelleybelle on July 20, 2007
    I still love this story! You are doing a great job...I think that you should make it a bit harder for them to fall into bed though...Jack won't respect her if she just falls back with her legs spread, and Bella would never go with a man who wasn't strong enough to hold her...i love the build up of sexual tension...make them work for it! in the end, it will be better...
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  • From LiveLaughLoveMe on July 19, 2007
    oh its getting good. As always I look forward to more.
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  • From MrGalion on July 19, 2007
    LOL

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