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Reviews for The Cold

By : RaveXTM
  • From Araea Swiftwind on December 17, 2007
    Woah...that was an abrupt ending. The story was good, but I feel like I am missing something with the way it ended. As a bit of constructive criticism, you should work on that. There are ways to write cliffy endings that never get resolved without it seeming like you just stopped writing whereever you felt like it. I hope that makes sense.
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  • From ANON - DvlshYFnGrl on October 15, 2007
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
    what happened to the smut?!?!?!?
    that was a mean cliff-hanger =~='
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  • From ANON - jane on August 30, 2007
    *Clicks little down arrow*
    *Does not see a chapter 2*
    *is confused*

    Why is the smut gone? Why no more?
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  • From ANON - jaz on August 20, 2007
    theres more to this right...right? i hate cliffhanggers!!



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  • From ANON - rosiel on August 18, 2007
    two blondes, so hot *drools*
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  • From Saka on July 31, 2007
    Ohh you have to update! Leaving it there is just mean. ^_^ Great job so far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2007
    there's going to be more....right?
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 19, 2007
    OH wow, this is really nice. I'm looking forward to the smut, update soon
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