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Reviews for New Colors of Life

By : Ssserpensssotia
  • From Nerys on January 18, 2008
    Oh dear, poor Hermione. Being petrified and all alone in a bedroom with handsome Tom Riddle... what is a girl to do? Chit chat? Muahahahahaaha!!! (OK, draws mind out of gutter). Love your story, they are so deliciously aggravated by each other. Please update soon... I am so curious to the new chapters.

    I don't know if you saw it, but some of your text on this site is bundled together. What I mean is that the paragraphs are not shown properly (dialogue: speech between two people is placed directly underneath the other's sentence and stuff like that). I had the same thing after posting the first chapter of Bittersweet here. The paragraphs in Word were not seen here for some reason and I had to use the edit chapter function to correct it there. And now, all of the sudden, with the newer chapters the site does see the enters. I think it has something to do with the way you set Word out to react on the press enter button, but I am not certain.

    Anyway: UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
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  • From AnnaValerious on January 15, 2008
    Love the scene where Hermione hits Tom with the chair! Priceless! Can't wait for more! :)
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  • From AnnaValerious on January 14, 2008
    I love your story! Can't wait for more! :)
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  • From luvneverfailsu on January 12, 2008
    Great start keep going!!


    Update soon!!
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  • From AnnaValerious on January 09, 2008
    I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From RoseTyler on January 08, 2008
    Yay!you got a name for the chapy!:D
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  • From Nerys on January 08, 2008
    OK, I was right, now my lines in my review are bold and all. LOL.
    You can find the answer to your question also at info&support:
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?s=fafbafff885e039498b7e05d380bfcc8&showtopic=3724

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  • From Nerys on January 08, 2008
    Hi,

    Thanks for a wonderful first chapter. I am really curious about the rest of this story.
    BTW. adultfanfiction does support bold and italics. I recently found the answer to this on the forum. You need to add the following codes between the lines that you want to be bold or italic.
    Bold: add line and end it with
    Italics: add line and end it with
    underline: add line and end it with
    Hmmm... I hope the codes remain visible now and that it doesn't just result to the lines in my review being made bold and all. LOL. If so you can mail me at the above address. Love the story and I am going to continue reading the rest now.
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  • From ANON - Tina on January 07, 2008
    first of all,
    I wish you a happy new year ;)
    I love your story!!!
    I will be delighted when a new chapter is online. Your oldest version of CoL was great but the beginning of this version is more exciting.
    Hope you are well an write fast ;)
    (sorry for mistakes, english is not my mother language)
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  • From RoseTyler on January 07, 2008
    Yey your first chappy!
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  • From ANON - SweetGirl on January 06, 2008
    ILL BE YOUR BETA
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2008
    I would so bata ... cause my first language is english... ,but my grammer isn't the best and i dont know if i could get it done really fast it might take me awhile... lol like a longgggggggggg while
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  • From RoseTyler on January 05, 2008
    Hi,


    If youre still looking for a Beta,I'd like to Beta your story.If you would like to contact me my email is cristinnerockwood@yahoo.co.uk
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  • From kittykatt4244 on January 05, 2008
    Facinating story. I can't wait for the rest!
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  • From Kaley on November 29, 2007
    Please keep going with this story. I love it.
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