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Reviews for Lost Sister, Found Uncle

By : DarkKat
  • From DarkKat on December 19, 2012
    I have decided that I need to answer a review. First, I know that Hogwarts is in Scotland. I have never said that it wasn't. I may have not written a sentence very well, but that sometimes happens as I tend to read and write a little differently than most people as I am dyslexic and see things a lot differently. If anyone ever has a question about something in my story, please ask. If anyone finds a mistake I may have missed in my many rereadings of my work, please share it. I tend to miss things.
    Betas. I don't like the idea of a beta. I go over my stories all the time and fix anything that I find needs fixing. I have heard of a few stories about Betas that I don't want to happen to me. I am not saying that all betas are mean. I just like doing it myself. It makes things easier since I know what I am trying to say and what I want charaters to say.
    If you read something that you think is pointless to the story, ask me about it and I will look it up and explain it. Like the mentioned sentence, where Harry says, 'Good, I am hungry'. I wrote it that way, because he was referring to the fact that Granger wasn't letting him to eat in the first place, just in not so many words.
    I am not making anyone read this fic of mine. If you don't like something about it, then don't read it.
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  • From ditch_kitty on December 19, 2012
    Hogwarts is in Scotland not England. Also you may want to work on things being said that are not necessary like when Harry was told That Lucius was going to have breakfast for him and he had replied that was good because he was hungry. You may want to find a beta to help you so that you can get a better handle on writing. You have several spelling and grammatical errors that almost caused me to dismiss this story it's only because the plot line intersted me and the story isn't ha;f bad that I actually continued past the first chapter.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 18, 2012
    Just got done with Chapt 1-20. They were the most unusual OCC I have read yet. But a heck of a lot of fun!! Can't wait to see how the Weasley's deal with all this & I want, no I need, more Harry & Severus.
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  • From cullengal101 on December 18, 2012
    hey
    love the story its really well written cant wait to read more please keep updating when you get the chance
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - remey on December 07, 2012
    ive just found this amazing story please update i need more to know what happens to albus and tom
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  • From kattniptwo on August 10, 2011
    Enjoying this story..I would love to see the twins join harry I have always loved gred and forge! also Remis
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  • From HeartStar on August 09, 2011
    I love this I hope to see more soon...please
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  • From Raie on August 08, 2011
    Love the characters and plot of your story and look forward to reading more. Please add me to your update listing. Ladieraie@nc.rr.com :)
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  • From krissybear on August 08, 2011
    it just keeps getting better yay! please email me again when you have updated
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  • From bloodshound on August 06, 2011
    i'd just like to say D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Luffs a happy family reunion. *sniffle
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  • From krissybear on July 26, 2011
    omg please write more! this story is really interesting! and btw i think that she should be alive but obliviated or had been held prisoner for a long time also the only spelling error i could find was when you kept saying finely instead of finally i dont know why anyone would say that you were makin a bunch of spelling errors anywho lol could you please email me when you have posted more? angelicsheila1978@yahoo.com
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  • From maggie1618 on July 21, 2011
    I'm so loving it. Can't get enough! Ready for more. Draco's mother should be bad, it's a good look for her. Not really sure who should switch sides. I'm ready for more Harry/Severus lovin;-) Thank you for writing.
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  • From wdb21212 on June 01, 2011
    totally love the story and just to throw my 2 cents worth in. I think you should have Lucius mum found in dumbledores house in a aura rade, looked in a dundgen.
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  • From hellangelhellina on May 27, 2011
    don't know about kathy would like for her to be alive. i can see cassy ageist them. i defiantly think neville, luna, fred, gorege, and a lot of the muggle born will go to there side.
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  • From sashathetech on May 26, 2011
    Hi I just read all 16 chapters and i think its a great story. I dont think narcissa should be brought back you already set her up as abad mother in trying to give draco to old moldy wart.

    as for lyn i think if she was alive she would have come forward sooner unless she has no memory of her life at all.

    I think most of the death eaters should come over except for wormtail, bella, narcissa, and greybeck

    Thank you again for a great story
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