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By : AstrumNocte
  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2012
    Wow this is one of the best Remus/Tonks smut story here on AFF. I'm serious, there are some really bad writers on here who don't know how to write good erotica but u by and far surpass them all!


    So..... When are we going to get to see round 2 for these two? When's Dora gonna get her THE BUSINESS? Cause she's been waitin a long time, y''know what imma sayin? Make it happen captn!
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  • From potatoedecapitain on August 19, 2007
    whooo also tonks is a metamorph...so she could probably morph her anus bigger anyway...just a thought...poetic licence I suppose...hehheee

    gabsxxx
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  • From potatoedecapitain on August 18, 2007
    hummm...hot. but...@ the beginning it gives the impression they have already had sex...and tonks even strokes his cock a little...so then surly she knows how big he is? just wondering...and also I'm sure if tonks wanted 2 do bondage as her sexual fantasy, then she would know what it entails and therefore not cry n shit. hmmm and also remus was far 2 confident...this is professor lupin we r talkin about not sirius...lol
    but apart from that it was qiet well written. a few typos here and there but then I'm always a committer to that crime...and hot sex aswell! lol just the charactors were a little...well out of character. just my pursonal oppinion but yeah
    gabsxxx
    ps..I'm sure tonks will have done bondage b4 anyway! shes a punk not a virgin remember lol
    x
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