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Reviews for Fallen Angel

By : alleycat88
  • From ANON - sadface on January 01, 2015
    Sad face :'( there isn't any more.
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  • From ANON - emma elizabeth pressnell on November 27, 2012
    wow what a BRILLANT PLOT, I LOVE IT. More soon please!!!!
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  • From ANON - emtherebel on September 05, 2012
    I THINK THIS STORY IS BRILLANT, PLEASE CAN YOU UP DATE SOON !!!!
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  • From ANON - willowrose16 on July 07, 2011
    This story is really good! Do you have any intention of updating it though? Please do!!!!
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  • From jgoodman on June 20, 2010
    love this story, please update
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  • From ANON - katie.e.p on December 23, 2009
    great need more
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  • From ANON - wishing u all the best on December 22, 2009
    the way you write fanfiction reminds me of stephanie meyer's way of writing. they easily fell in love.. there were impending doom and somehow they were easily captured, then they were easily released, somehow voldemort turned out to be a good guy. somehow the danger hadn't end yet. and somehow i imagine you're working up the stress about azazel's cruelty or whatever it is and then it will easily end in a happily ever after kind of ending.
    i think that you have great imagination, but perhaps you should give more depth to your story. allow your characters to have more time and more drama to deal with..
    and why aren't the students confused with the similarity between harry and tom anw?
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  • From Makovaso on March 25, 2009
    Good story, please update soon.
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  • From on March 25, 2009
    Wow, great fic! I hope the not-so-recent date does not mean that it is abandoned, but just that you're taking a break...
    While I generally dislike fics that involve other worlds and species and turn Voldemort into a sappy lover, I must say that the dynamics between Harry, Draco and Tom are fun indeed - and the sex is good. ^^
    I have a few points of critique, as well, though: For one, chapters 10-16 and 19-21 have bad formatting. On my computer, the text goes beyond the edge of the screen, which is beyond annoying. Then, 'Rona' in ch. 10 might enjoy being given back her male form. Also, ch.11: Luna's a Ravenclaw, why is she sitting with the Gryffs? At least a word of explanation would be nice. Ch. 13. I don't like that Hermione, the ever-reasonable one, just tells Harry to go right back to Draco when Harry only just realized that Draco more or less raped him the other day. That's not what a friend should do, never mind that Harry will eventually have to be with Draco. At that moment, it would have been better for him to wait awhile until Draco realizes himself that he fucked up.
    ...After that, I sort of didn't pay any more attention to minor details as I was rather happily taking in all the slashy goodness. *ggg*
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  • From on March 24, 2009
    Hey!
    Just a short note: Formatting of chapter 4 is screwed up. The text trails off somewhere far outside the screen...
    Otherwise, I'm enjoying the fic a lot. ^^
    - k.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2008
    I never thought I would like this threesome, but you have made it cute somehow. Kudos!
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  • From vannilla on October 14, 2008
    how exactly does harry give birth?
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  • From vannilla on October 14, 2008
    voldemorts at the house?
    ok ok

    let me see if i get the back story
    voldy never really wanted to kill harry he just wanted to get harrys mom to help him
    dumbledore dosent care that lucius is going to kill vernon
    wait isint dumbledore at the malfoy manner right now
    and whu]y would harry give in so quickly
    this is volemort!!!
    he killed his parent and has been trying to kill him
    and he hates draco and lucius
    he should have put up more of a fight
    but the story is very interesting and i do like the whole angel demond thing is he still a wizard?
    cuz if so he should be super powerful!!!!
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  • From vannilla on October 14, 2008
    this is all very non-canon
    but i will let it go for the purpose of the kick ass story
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  • From vannilla on October 14, 2008
    omg
    his mate!!
    half incubus?
    whatever,theyre hot!!!!
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