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By : MerenwenFefalas
  • From jamescun on November 20, 2011
    plz write more
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  • From luvhp on June 24, 2008
    Oh Gods!!!
    That was HOT!
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  • From RyuaAlba on October 27, 2007
    Mmm, I like it. Short, but very hot.
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  • From GryffindorToy on October 11, 2007
    This story was fantastic! It was sweet and sexy.... oh GAWD was it ever sexy!!!!!! You should write MOOOOOORE!!!!!!!
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  • From SummerRequiem on October 07, 2007
    This was just wonderful and lemon-y!I love it!
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  • From Utopia on October 05, 2007
    If they've been "playing" and "experimenting" for years, then perhaps this isn't as unrealistic as you think it is - especially with the use of the green toy stretching them - that first time wouldn't have been so bad. What would have made it unrealistic wasn't in here - so I won't dwell on that noncence! (lol). I did quite like this - it wasn't cliche or boring, it was nicely written and not vulgar.

    I do have two small complaints though: (1) Any chance of a title?
    (2) Any chance of more description? facial expressions, surroundings, bodily figures, sounds, feelings, emotions ... just to give it a more 3D edge to it and add that little bit more to the imagination.

    Even so, a pleasure to read.
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