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Reviews for Falling in a snakes arms,

By : JaceDamian23
  • From ANON - jjui on July 12, 2009
    right
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  • From ANON - anessavanella on November 28, 2008
    It got anti-climatic at the second chapter, I was practically rolling my eyes because I was confused. It felt like things were missing, a lot of details were missing.Please post the 3rd chapter so I know what's going on. cause it felt like you instantaneously made harry the bad guy, something's gonna lead to that. It was just too upfront. Just sayin' and this is not a flame just constructive criticism [anessavanella@aim.com]
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  • From chinohana on February 15, 2008
    Like it. Hate Potter. Kinda corny character, taking out the jerk in him looks real good!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2007
    what?
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  • From JaceDamian23 on November 18, 2007
    thankyou for the feedback hun. glad you like it. Unfortnately I am having major writers block for this story. I have lots of Ron and Draco stories though. Check them out.
    COnfessions is my newest one.

    angela
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  • From ANON - Abi on November 18, 2007
    Oh....*tears* I feel so bad for Ron right now. I love Draco/Ron fics. Good story..
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