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Reviews for all for you remix

By : hope21108
  • From ANON - HEARTSTAR on March 23, 2015
    I would love to see more please are you still writing it ?
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  • From HeartStar on July 01, 2010
    Well I hope to see more soon ;-)
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  • From ANON - Winters Prologue on June 21, 2008
    Aside from the few spelling mistakes this story is rather good and I shall definately continue to read it. A small suggestion that I will make, however, is don't have such large blocks of text. Split your text into paragraphs (around 3-5 sentences) so that its easier to read.

    Could you email me when you update, I definately don't want to miss the next installment. gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
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  • From voldemortsgrl on January 15, 2008
    Wow...this is really good so far.
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  • From Salios on December 16, 2007
    it's not bad, but it needs A LOT of work. you really should have edited it before you posted it. find a good bets and hash it out five or six times, then it'll be awesome ;)
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  • From Araea Swiftwind on December 13, 2007
    So, I basically like this story, but you are right about the spelling errors and stuff. If you'd like I'd fix that for you. I hope that there is more to this soon. Oh, and if you would like to take me up on my offer, e-mail me or send me a message somehow or something.
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  • From DamiaEternal on December 09, 2007
    Well first of all we need Harry's reaction and Voldemort telling Harry the 'truth' about his parents deaths. Is Severus on Voldie's side or Dumbles. (Yes I shorten names.) What is the best way to get revenge on Dumbles?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2007
    I read this before when it was on here. I'm interested to see where you take this... Voldie!Veela is always fun. I think there was only one other Voldemort Veela fic that I can remember... makes it a rare find. The only thing that bothered me aside from spelling/grammar is that it felt a little rushed, but... well, I tend to rush things, so I sure can't complain. If you would like, I could beta for you and toss some ideas off. My email is Blackenednightshade at yahoo dot com, if you're interested, drop me a line. Take Care!
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  • From on December 07, 2007
    like
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  • From alma on December 07, 2007
    Yay! I love Veela Stories.
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