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Reviews for A Chance at Happiness

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2015
    This may be a bit late, and not important to the content of the story, but you may want to recheck the formatting of your chapters and edit them if possible. Your chapter formatting is not consistent, and it makes your story a bit bothersome to read, especially on mobile. I do Luke the content so far, but having to flip a phone every chapter affects reading flow and increases irritability. II know I have quit stories for less, and I don't want anyone to miss out for a silly thing like that. :)
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  • From ANON - AngelSelene on August 10, 2012
    Interesting take on somewhat trite and overdone themes. However, there was something in this chapter that drove me absolutely nuts: how much money Harry drops on his clothing. You state that muggle clothing starts at a minimum of 15 galleons for a *piece* and then Harry gets 16 pieces of muggle clothing that would be (bare minimum, not even taking into account that pants and definitely the leather jackets are going to be way more than the bare minimum) 240 galleons. That's not including 6 sets of robes. It's a stupid detail, but I'm an editor so it really bugged me.

    Otherwise, I'm interested in reading more.
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  • From VoldemortGirl on October 27, 2011
    I liked it
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  • From jujukitty on January 30, 2011
    awww this was such an awesome story! yeah there were a few puntuation issues, but all in all, it was excellent. i loved the plot (and the plot twists), and you did a great job with your take on all the different characters. keep up the great work! :)
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  • From felicia2235 on October 11, 2010
    Loved it. Great story. You should so another with Harry and Voldemort.
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  • From shelly56787 on October 03, 2010
    okay.... i don't know if i've reviewed this store before... if i haven't i should have but what i really wanna see is Dante and his mate! *nods* Yup.... I wanna see Dante all grown up with his awesome shapeshifting mate..... *nods* just so you know...
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  • From ccdrgnlvr on May 23, 2010
    Loving this story. There is only one thing bothering me, I think Harry would not use Voldemort but Tom when speaking to his mate. I think Voldemort is more a title than a name. Just me.
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  • From yaoibryan on April 08, 2010
    *trying to point out a mistake (sorry, no idea why that last word got cut off in my previous review. like i said though, i loved this story, just thought i'd mention that one thing....)
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  • From yaoibryan on April 08, 2010
    i love this story so far, and i know that you probably won't read this, but just in case you ever do...the only problem i have with your story is in chapter 28, when reading skeeter's article, you kind of insinuate that hogwarts students could have been affected by the killings in the united states, but hogwarts is in england, so they really wouldn't care.... here's the quote if you're wondering where i got this '* And finally in the states just over thirty were killed during 1692 and 1693.

    The last one doesn't seem as bad as the others, but it is more personal because there were local wizards, that may have even attended Hogwarts, that were killed during those trials.' like i said, hogwarts is in england, so the USA killings wouldn't have been any hogwarts students....

    not trying to be all snide and stuff, just trying to point out a
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  • From jgoodman on November 30, 2009
    good story
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  • From keraizaki on November 24, 2009
    Ch 28: I would like to see story # 4 beacuse a) I don't know any of the crossovers, and b) I'm a big FG/HP fan, lol! Love your story! XD
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  • From AdamiRose on September 30, 2009
    Wow, wonderful story. I sat through about 1/3 of it per day for three days. It had my (normally very short) attention from the time I was able to sit and read until I went to bed!

    I have every intention of checking out all of your stories!
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  • From JadeEvans on June 16, 2009
    I LOVED this fiction. Once I started reading it, I just had a hard time pausing in order to do anything else. *cough* work *cough* While I did and do the story, there were one or two things that troubled me. And that is the punishment of the Weasley twins and Percy.

    THE TWINS never seemed to care for much outside of quiditch and practical jokes. They were fun loving guys that sometimes went out of their way to protect Harry from those that thought poorly of him. For example: In 2nd year, when everyone believed that Harry was the Heir of Slytherin, they made it a joke in order to make sure that Harry knew that he was not alone.) When dealing with the money issue... the answer lies with their actions at the end of Harry's 4th year. Orginally when Harry tried to give them his winnings from the tournament, they tried to not accept it but Harry would not take no for an answer. And then when they started up their shop, did they not make Harry a partner in the business? All of these actions happened even though they did not really take part in Harry's like outside of Quiditch, a few jokes, and some silent if not quite so silent support.

    PERCY, on the other hand, was a person out for power. He just never really tried to use Harry to obtain it. He was a man with a mission... he wanted to take part in the government and therefore obtain power and pretiege that way. Even if he was a somewhat blind follower of those above him. *cough* Fudge *cough*

    WHILE I can easily see the punishment of the 2 youngest Weasleys and possibly their parents (who deserved their punishment due to the actions they portrayed in this fiction) I just cannot see the twins nor Percy as deserving the punishment that they received. You hardly even mentioned them with the story as to portray their being guilty.

    BUT other than their punishment, I have nothing to argue with. The story was truly one that I loved.
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  • From vampirekisses on May 12, 2009
    Amazing story, I must say. One of the first Harry/Voldemort's I have read. I wish there were more with that particular pairing completed on here. The dynamics between the two of them interests me, especially when they're being linked romantically. Great work!
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  • From slashslut on May 02, 2009
    ha! their punishment was AWESOME!
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