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Reviews for Quidditch Lessons

By : dweek
  • From Pamelamoores on August 01, 2018

    Loved it!! Hope the ending means Draco is Luna's boyfriend as well as Little Raven's Master...


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  • From ANON - LightDesires on October 26, 2015
    I'm usually a BIG Dramione shipper but I have to say I can see this story becoming a guilty pleasure! Loved it
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  • From ANON - Paige Luna on August 18, 2014
    I love it! I read all 60 chapters! It is very well written. I can not wait for the squeal.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 29, 2013
    First, I am VERY SAD that this story is over...but all things must come to an end; even good things. Secondly, I LOVED that Hermione understood the significance of the 'wizard's collar' *snicker*! I love that Master Dragon is planning to keep Little Raven and that she in turn wants to stay!! While I am sorry that this story is over, I am glad that you finished it before November 1st. Because I will probably get very little reading done during the month of November, as I will be writing my own novel for the National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWrMo). I am VERY nervous about it, so if you want to cheer me up from time to time, email me at eclectic_pet@yahoo.com and let me know if you have posted an update for Smell of Submission and I'll try to sneak in a read and a review.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 29, 2013
    I just finished chapter 59 and wanted to review before the "last one" *sob*. I DID enjoy Little Raven's punishment...she finds it so easy to get into 'sub-space'; I envy her that. And I did LOVE that Master Dragon had as much difficulty being without his pet for two week. Even Masters must suffer too!!!
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  • From ANON - Aranel on October 29, 2013
    Well the escalated quickly.
    Don't quite know what to think.
    Might have to wait for the sequel to see where this is going.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 26, 2013
    Oh, I DID enjoy Little Raven's first round of punishment. I knew that leash attached to her bedpost would come up again *happy dance*!! I also like that she had to be a kitty (pet); too bad Tracey doesn't know about the accessories that muggles have found for the tail and ears *ROFL*. I can not wait to see how Little Raven handles two weeks without contact!?!?!?! More, Please!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2013
    hope ron get his own slave luna or hermoine there are a few other, but if ron finds out he my just kill draco, he stood up to sirus and date him to kill him to get to harry, he would not even be close to afraid of draco
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 24, 2013
    I don't think Tracey is going to get exactly what she is hoping for...but she will get used hard *snicker*. I want to feel sorry for Little Raven's upcoming punishment; but I just can't. She will have to face her Master soon and she may not be sitting for a long time *snicker*! More, Please!!!!! BTW, I WOULD read your original stuff.
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  • From ANON - Aranel on October 23, 2013
    Good job Tracy! She should be proud of how well she took Draco's anger. Ron's gonna lose his hands but Tracy did well. Honestly, what was Luna thinking? Draco is gonna tear that ass up... Might accidentally scare Luna off. Oh dear...
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  • From ANON - Aranel on October 20, 2013
    Luna is just a doll! Fuck, I really loved this chapter and there are tons I want to say about it and your review reply but it's 3:30something in the morning and I really should be sleep! Damn these fan fictions!
    Maybe I'll get around to making a proper review later. Must sleep....
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 19, 2013
    First, I think you should leave the original chapters as they are. The story is moving along nicely and I think that changing them would only be a distraction for you as the writer and those of use who have come to love the story as it is *big hug*. Oh, Draco can be a right selfish bastard...but what should we expect. I love that he felt that as her Master, HE should get to see her before 'the Bitch'...only as it should be!! Oh, and I got as tingly with both his punishments before she could meet her friends *shivering*! Can't wait for more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dru on October 15, 2013
    nothing new?!? tease
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 15, 2013
    Confused...did you just edit chapter 55? I'm going through withdrawals here!!! More, Please!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on October 11, 2013
    First, I am glad that you are already 'hatching' the next story *happy dance*!! Oh, you and Master Dragon can be soooo sadistic. Torturing Little Raven with those evil (wonderful) little clips. And I love that Little Raven was denied the big "O" for saying No...PRICELESS
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