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By : pittwitch
  • From tenoh27 on January 15, 2010
    That was wicked! Love the fact that Lucius was in reality manipulated by both Draco and Hermione. Thanks for the super!hot story.
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  • From ANON - Clare M on August 13, 2009
    Oh No!! You cannot leave it like that!!! That is way too hot. If you hadn't thrown the whole thing in at the end about Draco and Hermione knowing about it... but GUH! The whole..... oh my mind is just blurry now.

    Please write the next part, this MUST be a three part story. How does Hermione end up bringing Lucius home to Draco in his little outfit? How did she KNOW? Was it that she recognized Severus and the obliviation didn't work then she just figured Lucius must be the white tiger? Did Draco know about his father's little *business*? Oh please tell more... This story was very, very cool and totally unique. The idea of Severus as a Black Panther animagus stripper... just boggles my mind...

    Clare
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  • From ANON - Lyssander on August 30, 2008
    AWESOME!!!!!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 29, 2008
    Oooo Pittwitch I loved this! I loved the first one but this was a great sort of sequel, I'd love to see more if you are thinking about continuing!
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  • From magpie79 on August 29, 2008
    Pitt you bad bad girl!!!!
    Love it, def worth making the washing wait LOL
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  • From Scarybearhair on August 29, 2008
    Vicious plot bunny attack? LOL!!!
    Why do I keep thinking of that demented bunny from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. Here is innocent Pitt, sitting by her computer, when all of a sudden WHAM! LOL

    Anyway, I always loved this one-shot of yours so I am glad you added another chapter!

    Of course, this was so hot and depraved. I loved it! I was even a little stunned at first. LOL

    Then you put in that hilarious twist at the end. It was so much fun! You must write part 3! My two favorite Malfoys!

    Excellent job Pitt!




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  • From LaBibliographe on August 28, 2008
    Chapter 2: The first person takes a little getting used to and must be more difficult to write. It's hard limiting yourself to one character's viewpoint AND talking from their mind. Nice job.

    At first I was a little concerned that Lucius had no moral compass at all (and I suppose he doesn't) so the way he stalked and kidnapped Hermione and the familial boundaries he blithely rolled over and smashed for his personal, depraved pleasure, made him even more of a villain who would prey on his own son's wife without a qualm.

    Now we come to the twist. Lucius and Draco are two peas in a pod and apparently Hermione has jostled her way into their deviant lifestyle, enjoying it immensely. There is a question hanging - did Lucius know he was being set up? Either way, you've wickedly delivered us to chapter three (appropriately numbered, too).

    Your particular Lucius is somewhat more uninhibited and self-serving than the median, but his canon character has a great deal of latitude to play with, so anything goes with the blond wizard. Draco has always had a dark, nasty side. Hermione is the surprise.

    This chapter was certainly titillating, if a bit worrisome until one gets to the end. Whew! I feel a little better now. All parties are ready for the grand finale(?). INCLUDING ME!! Lovely chapter, nice writing, PW!
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  • From sheherazade on August 28, 2008
    Wow, and chapter two is even more blistering. You *are* going to write that threesome, aren't you?
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  • From sheherazade on August 28, 2008
    Lol, Pitt, that was sooo sizzling hot, and FUNNY. I can't believe I've never read a Lucius-as-stripper/gigolo story before. I have been missing out, clearly. Excellent.
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  • From kazfeist on August 28, 2008
    Nicely done. They certainly played Lucius, didn't they? You do need a third chapter to round it out, though. :D
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  • From ANON - Jaime on August 28, 2008
    OMG!! That was fantastic!! I loved the twist at the end. You must write the threesome. I beg of you!!
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  • From CoCoM on August 23, 2008
    Oh My! You are truly evil for making this just a one-shot....but what fab one-shot it was. I was laughing out loud at the ending. Hermione did the deed with her father-in-law who was dressed (and then undressed!) in a white leather G-string. Oh, it is too fantastic.
    Very yummy.
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  • From FemmeBono on July 20, 2008
    Now that was pleasantly twisted. :)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From nonentity on July 02, 2008
    Marvolous Ladies
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