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Reviews for Lucius Hidden Son

By : roseline
  • From ANON - Rowenasheir on April 13, 2016
    Excellent plot line but terrible grammatical/translation errors. It needs a good going over by someone whose first language is English
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  • From ANON - luluswolf on March 11, 2014
    HI, I loved the first few chapters, but the last two chpters I attempted to read were unredable. I couldn't understand what ws happening the grammer ws so bad. It did not make sense. Sorry. Great idea for a story but I can't finish it.
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  • From ANON - e.pressnell on February 19, 2014
    wow love it and the plot!!!
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  • From ANON - ky on November 20, 2013
    i really like your story, but your spelling is really getting to me.... you see, my English is not my first language so i can understand it's hard to write, but you may consider taking a beta because at times,
    it becomes really hard to understand what you are writhing. you write in broken english. you switch words around or use the wrong time or phrasing. again, i love your story but the spelling is making me unable to enjoy and understand it completely. best wishes....Ky
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  • From ANON - aleerah on November 17, 2013
    Are u goung to continue this story?
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  • From hawkswench on July 17, 2011
    Not sure what happened but this chapter was very confusing to read.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 02, 2010
    Interesting! Chapter 39 please!!!
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  • From lockheart on November 15, 2009
    I really like your story but it is hard to understand, you need to find someone to help you write it so it will be easier to read and more people may enjoy your wonderful writing. As it is now I can not finish it.


    J'aime vraiment que votre histoire mais le c'est dur
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  • From TerriMelfi on November 04, 2009
    I would love to see what you write next. Your a gret writer and your stories are great too.


    Thank you,


    Terri
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  • From koki on October 25, 2009
    Can you not write properly?
    Your sentences are backwards, inside out.
    Have someone doulbe check your work before you finnish the chapter.
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  • From lilkkjo082004 on October 24, 2009
    ok so other than the grammer it is ok
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  • From Enamoril on October 09, 2009
    I only have one complaint; otherwise I love this story.

    Too many !'s. >
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  • From Japhia on May 27, 2009
    This story has a great plot but I think a beta would do it quire well. If you're looking, I would be happy to do it.


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  • From wolfcathope on March 15, 2009
    I really like this story but one thing concerns me where is Harry's streng, determineation, stuborness, and attraction for trouble.
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  • From Makovaso on November 19, 2008
    Good story, please update soon.
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