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Reviews for Pain of the Innocent

By : Emptyinside
  • From firebolt86 on December 27, 2010
    e-mail me an update please!oreo.fanfiction@live.com
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  • From hellangelhellina on October 29, 2010
    You have to write more I need to know what happens as he grows up.
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  • From ANON - Hilda_kitty on May 27, 2010
    Good, except for the fact that it lacks description. I mean, there is description, but it's vague and there's not much of it. What kind of tree was it? How big was the lake? How big was the property? All this can help the reader understand what you are trying to convey. On another note, there is clearly a plot. Worth reading, and reviewing... =D hope I help!
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  • From NekoiHiwatari on April 08, 2010
    in all truth.

    I am warry of stories from this section. mostly because the authors here usually write great stuff! but then... they cease to update, hardly every complete. =(

    but I'm reading this nonetheless. for research. if not anything else.

    I like you're reasoning to justify harry's place with voldermort. =)
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  • From NyaleIshamba on April 06, 2009
    ooh this seems like a really good story. Update soon please!!
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  • From ladyedgecombe on November 30, 2008
    it will be interesting to see what happens when Harry/Vince turns 11. Will the letter from Hogwarts get through? Will it go to Petunia and never reach Harry? I feel as if these two friends of his will help him not to become dark but maybe not? So many questions, please update soon. Love the story
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  • From ANON - Jen-el on October 17, 2008
    this story is awesome. please update soon. i cant wait to what happens when he gets older. i like the story but i think i should be speeded up cause i might loose interest really fast and i dont want that to happen. email me when you update pretty please! love it so far :) Jen-El
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  • From NightStalker22 on August 08, 2008
    I like your story, I was wondering is Harry going to be dark in this story, I hope so, also I didnt know how to vote so I thought that you just do it in the review so I vote for Dante I like that name, hope you update the story soon, good work.
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  • From anniea on July 03, 2008
    poor vince/harry, i have to say that those british social service people are bitches. you may want to change a few things there. there's probually guidelines that the Social services have to follow before they put a child in an orphanage and they would never strike a child. please update soon *kisses*
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  • From Felinity on May 24, 2008
    cool story, its going really well. i'm glad harry has made some good friends and i hope he'll teach that prat a lesson :)
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  • From ANON - landra on May 02, 2008
    Nice story!! I hope you update soon!!^^
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  • From ANON - Bones on May 01, 2008
    Very good. i really like this story, good that Harry-Vince has some good friends to stick by him no matter what.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on April 11, 2008
    Hmmmmm interesting, I would love to see more of this. Update soon
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  • From voldemortsgrl on March 30, 2008
    more please...this is really good so far...update soon please...
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  • From KagetsuAsame on March 12, 2008
    Interesting start, I'm curious what's going to happen. Keep it up.
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