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Reviews for Bump in the night plus...

By : magpie79
  • From vampkestrel on December 16, 2011
    wow, I can not begin to express how much enjoyment i just received from reading that it was deliciously smutty yet funny and i thought i would die when Lucian joined in. Please write more O_O
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 17, 2008
    Chapter 7:Well, I got my threesome. If this is the end, I
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 17, 2008
    Chapter 6: The interplay with Snape sitting back and letting Lucius do basically innocuous things to Rose at the beginning of their
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  • From LaBibliographe on April 22, 2008
    Chapter 3-5: So Rose gets disgusted looks about her bad behavior from a Death Eater. Where
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  • From kittyperry on April 08, 2008
    Hello, This was really cool, but I can't believe we have to wait all this time for the next bit. Hope you're back soon and update as soon as possible. I really want to know what happens next. I'm glad Sirius has Jen... its nice to see him and Lupin in relationships as well. That dynamic is interesting.
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 05, 2008
    Chapter 5

    Magpie, you
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 05, 2008
    Chapter 3-4

    Eeeek! I
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  • From sheherazade on April 04, 2008
    Oh my Gaaaaaaad, you can't leave it there! OK, I can adjust to the idea of letting my imagination give me a preview of what is to come. I've always wanted to do a Snape/Lucius sandwich, but can't think of ways to slot it into the action, bah! Ooh, Lucius is a baddy, isn't he? Though I like his 'my friend fancies you' type setting up of Snape.

    It's great what pops into your head at 3 a.m. sometimes, heh.
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  • From sheherazade on April 03, 2008
    Wow, bring on the insomnia, if this is the result! Very hot indeed, and lololol at Remus falling for the old 'what shores?' line.

    Severus is getting drawn in almost against his will; I wonder if he will go with the flow or try to keep Rose at arm's length.
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  • From pittwitch on April 02, 2008
    Yummy Snape smut! Hits the spot everytime. Thanks for sharing ... and however will Miss Rose find her way home? Pitt
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 13, 2008
    Chapters 1-2: This may have started out as a one-shot, but it feels like more. I think the reason is that Snape, for all he's reclusive and bitter, seems more the type to want some kind of real relationship rather than truly enjoying a one-off shag. He was quite willing to merely sleep in the same bed as Rose - it was she who initiated things and made him feel she really wanted him.

    He returns the next day which also gives a strong indication he is interested in her. I liked the way she turned off his worries over his lack of attractiveness. That would work better for him than fulsome compliments - she can save those for our vain blond wizard.

    It looks like a line is forming to measure Lucius' inseam - even though he is apparently a self-centered git in your story, he does have that effect on women. Okay, okay, yes including me **waving from the end of the line patiently awaiting my turn at those trousers**.

    Go Snape! Two shags in two chapters. Is he kind and benevolent under his remote attitude or does he also have a few fetishes Rose will experience in possible later chapters.

    Does the addition of Lucius signal any plot twists involving the dangerous Death Eaters? I'm just as happy to only follow the exploits of our earnest, perky, Snapestruck young woman as she slowly hauls in our dark wizard. Shag by shag by shag.

    This story is very cute and amazingly, you've been able to believably bring Rose into Snape's sexual orbit in one chapter. Emphasis on 'believably'. Very nicely done!

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    I do second Shez's suggestion of breaking up your paragraphs more. I think you do have paragraphs,but they aren't showing up online. With Microsoft Word you need to put TWO lines between paragraphs to make ONE line of space on AFF. Try it. 8-)
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  • From Scarybearhair on February 12, 2008
    Chapter 2

    Hahaha
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  • From Scarybearhair on February 12, 2008
    Chapter 1

    Yay, I finally made it over here to read this. I have been meaning too for awhile. And now I see you have updated
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  • From sheherazade on February 09, 2008
    Ha ha, she gets to measure Lucius' inside leg AND shag Snape on his robe fabric. How much better can a girl's day be?

    I do think you write gorgeous smut; it's funny how once you start, you have to write more...and more...and yet more! (I hope, anyway)
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  • From sheherazade on January 24, 2008
    Yay, forced to share a bed with a willing woman - I love that set-up. And I do like how she had shown she was on his side by sticking up for him against Sirius, so it was not just a total 'Oh, we were sharing a bed so we thought 'Why not have sex?'' type thing. I think somebody sticking up for him in an argument would have a profound effect on Sev, especially a pretty girl.

    Lovely smut too; graphic enough to be able to imagine watching it (or experiencing it even), and not at all tacky (like me, lol).

    If I had any constructive criticism to make, it would be to add more paragraph breaks; those long sections of unbroken text can be off-putting. Other than that, I loved it xx.
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