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Reviews for Ever Observant

By : Pho3niX
  • From ANON - Sincerely on October 31, 2012
    Please don't give up on this story! It's amazing so far! I really love the character you've given to Blaise! I very much hope you finish this story
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  • From ANON - Mistress DragonFlame on April 12, 2009
    Interesting. I look forward to seeing more, if you do indeed intend to write it.
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  • From Jaynie on January 18, 2009
    I love it. I know it's been ages since you've updated this story, but I just had to review. I love the style of your writing. You're descriptions are detailed and, as far as I'm concerned, quite accurate. I hope you decide to continue with this story because you're off to a very promising start.
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  • From margaritama on January 07, 2009
    great start -- please continue. love how you take us through all the hogwarts years and just end it with the start of the story. the question I have is has Hermione noticed him?
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  • From lordoberon on January 06, 2009
    More, More, I say!
    What a great buildup, a great setup! I love the little things he notices about her, the thing about how she wears her hair, etc. Also the way he is tanlized by the wyay she does not show her body, mmm. Intriguing! Please, more soon!
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  • From ohsnaptheresa on December 31, 2008
    interesting so far. please keep it up and update soon! when you do update, can you drop me an e-mail at ohsnap_theresa@yahoo[dot]com? i'd really appreciate the gesture! thanks!!
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  • From margaritama on October 25, 2008
    what a great prologue...really well written: seductive with overtones of edge and just the right amount of dark
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  • From Mishka on October 21, 2008
    *grins madly* I think that this is a very wonderful first chapter to what is going to be a great story. You developed Blaise so well! He doesn't come off as shallow or undeveloped--and you created character traits that fit in with his marked absence int he real books. XD I can't wait until you update! Especially since his last observations prelude a wonderful relationship with Hermione.
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  • From ANON - JD on September 28, 2008
    i like the plot. i wonder what steps he'll take to have her... hopefully you'll update soon. simply looking forward to everything.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on August 06, 2008
    Nice build up, I like the progression of his interest. And he seems a little dangerous for her, which is very interesting as well.
    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Alisha on April 30, 2008
    It's fascinating so far! I like where this is going! Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2008
    This story is wonderfully enticing, I hope you continue!
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  • From ANON - Em on March 30, 2008
    The writing style is great, very intriguing plot so far. Is there more? I hope so...
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  • From Mishka on March 02, 2008
    *drools* You brought up points about Hermione that I have been thinking about, so the "Rock on I totally agree" Aspect in me can't wait to see where you take it. At two-shot right? If so I want to see how Blaise gets Hermione in the last chapter. I also like dhow Blaise understood the hardest part would be convincing Hermione that he wanted all of her for a long amount of time. It made me sappy. Being an author endeared with Hermione and wishing for understanding males (if manipulative, but we can forgive that as long a he takes care of Hermione) s she doesn't have to be as defensive I am very happy to read this. It was short and to the point but everything fit and no one seemed OOC. Probably because it's Blaise...Anyhow, I really can't wait for the udpate!
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