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By : Severusluciusallthebadboys
  • From prettypinkpony on February 14, 2008
    Ooooo I'm loving this story. Can you message me when you update? noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
    I loved the scene with Luna and Lucius in the dungeon. Tasty. Nellie
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  • From LondonMarie on February 13, 2008
    I'm so glad you updated. I was wait forever lol. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From pittwitch on January 29, 2008
    You have started in a very interesting place. I agree wholeheartedly that Snape spent an entirely uncomfortable year as the Headmaster with the Carrows hovering nearby, waiting for anyone to slip. If I may offer just a hint to make your story easier to read, I suggest paragraphs or line breaks between paragraphs so that the text isn't so jumbled together on the screen.

    Thank you for sharing,
    Pitt
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