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Reviews for Dark Beauty *Newly Updated Chapters*

By : Larentia
  • From ANON - luna love on September 11, 2008
    I see you fixed it. Great chapter too!
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  • From ANON - luna love on September 11, 2008
    You should know that chapter 2 and 3 are exactly the same. Other than that it's a great story!
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  • From ANON - kalush on April 28, 2008
    sounds great wish to hear more
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  • From ANON - tiff on February 12, 2008
    oh so she sent Dobby to "help" Harry
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  • From Fyre on February 12, 2008
    Awww hun its no problem to review a story that has so much potential :) anywhooo take your time developing Calli, if i imagine correctly it will be worth the wait :D and im so glad we are now going to see the shell become broken and the true Calli come though- if only secretly :-]
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  • From ANON - tiff on February 12, 2008
    I wonder if Calli will make a ture friend ever
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  • From Fyre on February 11, 2008
    Well then she is quiet the ice queen... or not... hmmmm gryfindor? and is she trying to break away... or mearly toying with the idea...? lots of questions :))
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  • From ANON - tiff on February 11, 2008
    Poor Calli she has no one to be with right now eveyone will stay away from her.
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  • From ANON - tiff on February 11, 2008
    I love how the hedge attacked Draco at the end and the adults did not even hear it. that was great.
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  • From Fyre on February 10, 2008
    Well I definitely like your opening 2 chappies. Cali seems like such a... fun... person to play with lol and I can't wait to see how you adapt HP to your story :)
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  • From ANON - tiff on February 10, 2008
    Good start can't wait to see where things will go with this story.
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