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By : tambrathegreat
  • From ANON - Yocum1219 on July 14, 2009
    I know you meant for this to be a one shot, but if you ever get bored or just a wild hair, feel free to add to this!! And I have now reviewed all the stories I've read. I added the Letters from America to my story alerts on FF.net, so that'll make it easier! :-) But I'll still read them here! I take it you'll update them at the same time. :-)
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  • From ANON - LadyMoriannaMalfoy on January 26, 2009
    mmmmmmmm.... ah nothing better than a teenage Lucius and a Greek villa as a back drop. Makes me want to go back home to Athens. *gets all misty eyed*

    thankyou for the awesome read!
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  • From ANON - Myene on July 18, 2008
    Wow. Very well done.

    Sigh...i'm going to start to liek Lucy, and it will be all your falt!
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  • From Jilliane on June 26, 2008

    Nothing wrong with the way you write sex scenes, M'dear! You did a great job, and I loved Lucius' surprise at the end. Well done!
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 01, 2008
    Chapter 1: For your first time out of the gate, this was very fine. Lucius was definitely a seventeen-year-old super randy young man who couldn't stop nature from taking its course. It appears his father remembered enough of his own youth to know what kind of bait to wave in front of his son. For a beginner, Lucius knew what he wanted to do, but it helped that the maid was experienced and generous with her favors. She was probably being paid very well by Abraxas, but I'm sure Lucius couldn't have cared less if that was going to be the direction his summer was taking.

    Cute story line and hot smut. Yummy! I enjoyed this immensely!
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