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Reviews for Masters of Manipulation

By : Nerys
  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2015
    I demand a sequel!

    It is my duty to inform you, that you will have killed a certain innocent reader if Prisoner, Apprentice, and ff.net MOM2 aren't updated soon :P

    I love your writings!
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  • From ANON - Kim on October 23, 2014
    This was so amazing! Hermione was brilliant, but not unrealistic and Tom was infuriating, but perfect. I'm so happy I read this, thank you!
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  • From ANON - L on June 28, 2014
    Wauw...amazing. Nerys and Serpent, tell me you charmed this story to pull the reader into going without food or drink until she finishes it... just so I won't feel so bad (hehe just kidding I feel SO GOOD)
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  • From brightneeBee on June 08, 2012
    I can't remember if I reviewed this already, but since I'm leaving this anyway. (I really need to start reviewing as I get done with each story - but I'm a procrastinator, so...go figure)

    I lurrrved this so much! And I just noticed a Part 2 on ff.net, which I will be reading, once I re-read this!

    Your execution of this plot was impeccable - this story could do no wrong!
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  • From ANON - Laura on May 25, 2012
    Aw man I really like this fic but I wish it ended with them in love and happy together, even if he was still a bit evil I wanted him to really love Hermione!! It didnt really mention anything about that, how they ended up together, her confessing her love to him, etc. it sort of seemed like he's just faking everything!
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on January 20, 2012
    I am going to reread this now in order to go onto MOM2. Sadly I didnt get to read the first draft, so hopefully I would never know what I was missing...LOL I love this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, it threw me with how in depth you are and you are an superb author. I hope one day I can shell out awesome stories like u.
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  • From ANON - CherryPower on July 15, 2011
    i don't understand, so both Tom and Hermione are evil? Or are there just some after-effects haunting Hermione and Tom just wanting to rewrite all the novels for proof?
    Amazing story, by the way!
    LOVED IT !
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  • From VictoriaVouivre on January 01, 2011
    This story is amazing! I've been reading it two days with only short break for much needed sleep :) I enjoy many parings that include Hermione (exept for Hermione/Ron - that is just not right ;) ), but since I've read "Master of Manipulation" I can't imagine reading anything but Hermione/Voldemort(Tom Jr.). Sometimes I stop reading story in the middle, because the plot become predictable hence boring but your story is anything but that :) The thing I love the most is the way you characterised Voldemort/Tom Jr. It was so realistic, that I felt you parsonally know Him ;) Right after I finished reading this story, I just had to read "The Bittersweet Taste of Victory" (and also finished it nearly without sleeping...). Anyway I have a rule to read only finished storys but I just feel that this time I'll have to make an exception and read your other fanfictions :) You became my favourite author, so I hope you'll never stop writing :)
    Greetings from Poland and a lot of inspiration and time for creating those simply stunning fanfictions :)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on November 27, 2010
    Hehehe... loved the ending of this one. Tommy-boy up to his tricks, but he and Hermione is together ^^ Wiiih! And All was well. The new, "and they lived happily ever after".
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  • From TheLadyMiya on November 25, 2010
    At chapter 14 and finally finding a mistake to snigger about! "Hermione saw the robes fly towards her to bind" Hihi... sorry ;) It's the only one I've seen actually, so I don't think your mistakes are that bad. Or maybe it's just a proof of what a bad editor I am. Well... you would know about that seeing you have read what I've written. Anyway, at that sentence I just got such a visual of Hermione being attacked by a lot of flying robes. Which would wrap someone up just as nicely as ropes, of course ;) Oh, and I enjoy the little extra smut you added in this chapter! And nooo, they won't touch each other again, no, not at all...
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  • From TheLadyMiya on November 25, 2010
    Wait a minute... how come Hermione manage to see James, Lily and Harry when they are still under the Fidelius Charm and Peter hasn't told her about their location like he had to Voldemort? Hm... or did Voldemort use Peter to completely break the spell? I mean... shouldn't the secret still be kept since Peter is alive after all? Or did Dumbledore break the spell?
    Something here, and in canon as well, doesn't make completely sense.
    Oh, and now I realise why I didn't remember her talking to Salazar, because she didn't... oh, well :)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on November 25, 2010
    "She had not found the experience of having a piece of the Dark Lord inside of her a pleasurable one".... snort... I know for a fact she will change her opinion about that after a while ;)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on November 23, 2010
    Just thought you should know, you have named chapter three "chapter 4" in the document. Got a little confused there but then I realised I wasn't the wrong making some mistake, YOU were ;) Hehe, just teasing. I had forgotten most of this story so it's fun to reread it again. I had even forgot she was in Slytherin as well... and that Salazar sent her the book. Oh, well :) now I'll go to bed!
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  • From magentasouth on August 07, 2010
    LOVE this story - soooooooo very much. Especially the ending. LOVELOVELOVE!!!
    (happy)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2010
    This story was truly enthralling. You had me hooked from the start and you didn't let up. You proved that you can write one heck of a story with a complicated plot and just the right amount of hot smut. A perfect 10 out of 10 I assure you.
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