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Reviews for A Fated Marriage

By : onetinykiss
  • From deadlybeauty112908 on February 11, 2011
    omg im soooo happy you've started back on this story! i've been waiting for months! :)

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  • From dragongirl on February 01, 2011
    That was so funny! But we don't know who the mystery guy is.......

    Ideas...

    1. Pranks from the twins to the git brother of Viktor in complicity of his little brother.
    2. Harry, the Weasleys giving Viktor the talk again. Just in case he missed it
    3. The players wifes put in place by their husbands in a moment where they try something on Hermione.
    These are for the reception is you need more let me know...... my email is ishtarluz2012@gmail.com and you need to id your subject with the name of the fic so I will open it. Chao! Please update soon.
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  • From Recordkeeper on January 10, 2011
    i have to say this is a really great story so far. I love the way you wrote viktor's character and his family. you have quite a few errors in your story though. not so many miss spellings as just words missing from sentences. you should probably have a beta go over it. other than that i love the plot and the original characters. please keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From dragongirl on January 08, 2011
    This is a beautiful story that need continuation......... So please... keep them coming. I love the mystery intertwined in the plot. But the pranks are the best.
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  • From hidaritoki on November 21, 2010
    Cute little fic. So glad to see Viktor getting some love and attention. That stalker isn't Harry, is it? I hope not. I do hope you update again soon. I want to read about the wedding and the honeymoon.
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  • From 800emz008 on November 16, 2010
    I really really like this story
    I think you should take it to granger enchanted and post it there too!!

    grangerenchanted.com/enchant/index.php
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  • From twilight313 on November 02, 2010
    aw I loved it!!!
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  • From Kayrox133 on October 25, 2010
    I am happy to see another chapter up. Really like the story!
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  • From on October 20, 2010
    Bad story, simply because it is a 'marriage law' story. In the REAL WORLD, no one would condone that law and people like myself would fight against it, with deadly physical force if necessary.
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  • From ThePhantomPixie on October 17, 2010
    this story is fantastic! i really enjoyed hermione speaking out against the wives, it would be unlike her simply to just sit back and take it like Dorian told her to. Look what she did to malfoy in third year! This is the first Hermione/Viktor fic i've read, i tend to avoid them because he isnt one of my favourite characters but after this I think I'm going to try and look into them more. Its an inspiringly well written story and I appreciate the real life element of writing a story. Everyone has their own lives to get on with. However, that doesnt mean that I'm going to be sitting impatiently on my hands until an update is posted.

    I cannot wait to see how this story plays out. It truly is something wonderful to read, even if some of the people deserve a good slap around the face and told to grow up.

    Also, well done with the inclusion of the love of Harry, not something i would have thought up really. He always seemed to gravitate toward Ginny too much. Its refreshing to not see them all over each other.

    Final note; I honestly laughed out loud at the threat from the Weasley males in 'the talk'. Charlie especially. It tickled me no end and I truly believe you have a talent in writing. Don't ever stop and I wait in haste for an update!

    Until then!

    pixie
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  • From HeSaidOvercast on September 19, 2010
    I am totally completely and utterly in love with this story. Please continue. I love the Hermione/Viktor pairing, and yours is one of my favorites.

    Thanks!!!!
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  • From Glorioux on September 09, 2010
    Cute story. Original take
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  • From leftybeky on July 12, 2010
    I've been following this story since the beginning and even though you don't update nearly often enough it is one of my favorites. I'm ready to hear about the wedding and honeymoon! Let's see some tension too--maybe the law is repealed and they have to decide if they love each other or not. Please update soon!!
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  • From chickaboo on February 19, 2010
    Cake definitely cake. Yum...I want cake now.
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  • From Coipje on January 11, 2010
    I like this story
    I just can't stop reading it ;)
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