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Reviews for Supernatural Abyss

By : samantha1985
  • From loretta537 on February 24, 2011
    this is a good story, i hope you update it soon
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  • From animaangel01 on November 29, 2009
    Please write more!
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  • From ANON - ewe on November 14, 2009
    this is really good hope that you continue with it.
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  • From ANON - red713 on September 24, 2009
    It's an interesting start, and I look forward to reading more. As a very small side note, you did happen to stumble onto a pet peeve of mine: "atm machine". Calling it an "Automated Teller Machine machine" is redundant.
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  • From ANON - Toki Mirage on June 02, 2009
    Ooooooh, I'm totally interested!!!!! ^^ Can't WAIT to see what you do next!
    Mirage
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  • From ANON - flare on December 01, 2008
    This is really good. Please keep it up this is amazing, i can't wait to see the next chapter please update it soon!
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  • From Dragonpink on November 30, 2008
    Glad you updated =^.^= Love the story!!!
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  • From sanda on November 27, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From Ladyroo88 on November 26, 2008
    i love it!!! more please!!
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  • From danawarner on November 26, 2008
    I bet ole' Albus was preventing the letters from getting thru.

    BTW: not great-full, it's grateful
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  • From ANON - Jamie on November 26, 2008
    I really like this story. =D
    Can't wait to read what happens next. ;)
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  • From GemJewel on October 23, 2008
    oooooohhhhhhh. fun! there are many parts to this story that I'm interested in reading more about, so please update more soon!!
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  • From ANON - kira on June 14, 2008
    While I like your idea, I think some of your characterizations and dialogues could have been better. Dumbledore's actions and questions didn't fit too well with Harry's reactions and thoughts(...if he disliked Dumbledore why does he work as DADA professor?).

    When exactly was the "last battle"? Why would Anita want to ask Jean-Claude about a HUMAN magic user who is new to the town(...how does she know he is new to the town in the first place?), since only vampires need to ask the Master of the City for hospitality? Why doesn't Harry protest Anita's rather rude and unprofessional order to "stay in town"? It doesn't make sense for Anita to act so unprofessional in her Federal Marshal persona and Harry would be free to press charges for undue harassment(...which as a mature war veteran I'd imagine him to do).

    I really do like your idea, but I think you could do a much better job if you didn't rush your writing.
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  • From windlg84 on June 09, 2008
    interesting
    drop me line whne you update

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  • From ANON - Angel on June 05, 2008
    Update! Update! Update!
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