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By : Seselt
  • From JaceDamian23 on January 09, 2009

    For no sensible reason, Hermione started to cry. Draco put his arms around her and helped her bottle feed the fuzzy bundles before taking her to bed. The next night she was more composed, taking notes so she could learn to read the changes. She petted them. It was much easier to tell them apart in cub form. Alexander was chocolate brown, Rosalind was bronze and Jonas was sandy furred. All had their eyes tight closed and cute stubby ears.

    awwww how adorable lol




    I love this story alot hun. It was hot but also good. Ive got to admit that when you wrote Draco into your story it got even better. I love Draco/Mione. You also write a amazing Fenrir. Nice job hun.

    I hope that you come back with more sometime soon. If you do can you PLEASE email me? it would mean alot to me.

    AngelinaGuerin23@hotmail.com


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  • From JaceDamian23 on January 09, 2009

    She glanced down as Draco shifted forward a little and caught one of her nipples gently between his teeth. His tongue flicked over the terribly sensitised bud. Hermione shivered. He sucked lightly wondering if he would get a taste of her. He had not had his fill of the witch yet.


    thats a hot part...btw love that Draco was at the hospital holding her hand
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  • From JaceDamian23 on January 09, 2009


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  • From GoddessBella on December 02, 2008
    Poor baby!!!! I love Fenrir, and Hermione is being stubborn, she knew she likes it. So what now. Great story I read it in 3 days. I couldn't put it down. So great story update ASAP!!!!!
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  • From Cathartesaura on June 26, 2008
    Hey, I'm not sure if you're done with this story or not, but I just had to say, nice job - I especially like the fact that you didn't make Hermione fall in love with Fenrir, which I half figured was where this story was going. I like the way you did it - you didn't make him a complete monster that the reader hated, but you also remained firm on the fact that Hermione didn't enjoy their time together. Great work!
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  • From ladydragonfly on June 17, 2008
    Epilogue? Please? I wants more... :D
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  • From Foerick on June 16, 2008
    Wow!

    Not your usual erotica fare, with pages and pages of sex, which gets boring after a page or two. There was an gripping plot, with twists and turns, building up to the moments and making them more vibrant and exciting. The characters were alive and breathing, so you could really feel everything they exprienced. I couldn't stop reading and I want MORE!
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  • From chickaboo on June 14, 2008
    So I just realized that this says it's complete. Please tell me you're going to at least post an epilogue or something? Please? I'm dying to know what happens to Hermione, Draco, Fenrir, and the babies. Hope you continue just a bit more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 09, 2008
    Another great chapter. I am glad that Hermione was the one to catch Fenrir. I think that even though she doesn't want him to be a part of the babies' lives, she should at least let him see them once. I think it would be nice if she would eventually accept him and allow him to be with her and the babies. I look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From Awakenelda on June 09, 2008
    Oh my god this story is kick ass!! It was so hot when Fenrir was fucking hermione in wolf form :P and im really glad she kept her babies and i LOVE the romance with her and Draco too!! Great job!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 09, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 07, 2008
    Excellent. I love the unique names that Hermione chose for her triplets. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 04, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more to see what she names her children.
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