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Reviews for Harry Sickness

By : dirtydarella
  • From callistianstar on September 07, 2008
    You make my day before it has begun (3 AM and I've yet to fall asleep). But I really liked how you made Draco speak French, and portrayed Draco's feelings, as well as Harry's. Wonderful job. :)
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  • From SickPuppy on August 06, 2008
    I was feeling so sorry for Draco! Beautifully written, thnak you so much! Now, going to read the companion piece...SP
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  • From ANON - Lunicorn on July 06, 2008
    Hey - I just wanted to let you know I think your story is terrific - really nicely done. You drew out Draco's sense of unnease and confusion so well, how he writes it off as sickness because he can't admit the truth. The ending was very nice indeed; there's nothing better than that moment of realization for Draco/Harry (and the rest of us reading along) when they finally figure it out... Let the shagging reach new heights! And please, by all means let us watch - yum. My only comment would be how Draco reveals in the beginning that's "its always against a wall" even though he thinks Harry deserves better, but they end up in bed at the end of the piece. I had a moment of vertigo; was Harry lying in the alley? Oh! Duh! They're in a bed! I liked them there, and it made sense they would progress there as things went on (more comfortable walls, if nothing else!) I just missed how they got there. NO CRITICISM intended. You've got a wonderful, clear style and great ideas that you develop well. Thanks for sharing them. Cheers.
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  • From hpn827 on June 06, 2008
    I had to read this again. It's just so good.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 02, 2008
    Ooowweee!!! Speak that french, baby!!! SPEAK IT!!! :-D

    Man, I just love it when I read 'Draco-speaks-French'. *sigh*

    It's not called the language of love for nothing.

    By the way, glad to see you writing again.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 31, 2008
    I so did not know this was out and so after reading the birthday fic I looked you up and there it was! Beautiful fic. Draco loves him but doesn't want to say it. And poor Harry wants more from him but draco wont give it. I liked how in the end it was rather ambiguous as to whether or not Dracc will fufill Harry's wish, even though he says he will. Lovely fic!
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  • From ANON - Olie on May 25, 2008
    This is the 3rd time i've read this & I cry everytime.
    Please write a sequel. I just love the intensity of the story.
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  • From Utopia on May 16, 2008
    I'm another one on an end of term wind down - and I adored yours!

    My French is appauling, though my other half's isn't that bad - he knows lots of naughty words in French. lol.

    This was an absolute pleasure to read, well written, packed with emotion and a happy ending.

    12/10
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2008
    Hey
    I speak french and I just wanted to tell you that your french isn't wrong but it does sound a bit too formal. Maybe you could write instead of
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  • From ANON - airhead622 on May 08, 2008
    fue mas fant
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 05, 2008
    Love this!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 04, 2008
    I'm pretty sure you didn't get your French wrong: "You are the most important person in my life. I love you..." Seems right
    Great story!
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  • From Jilliane on May 04, 2008

    My French isn't that good either, but was it "You are the most important person in my life. I love you, I love you, I love you.? Something like that?

    Whatever it was, it was intense. Seemingly unrequited love returned. I do so love a happy ending! Very nice!

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  • From ANON - tch324 on May 04, 2008
    Translate what Draco said please.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on May 04, 2008
    WOW!!! Can it get anymore intense. I loved how obsessed Draco is w/ Harry. It was so sweet & heartbreaking at the same time.
    I'm definitely saving this so I can read it again in the future. It's just so amazing.

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