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Reviews for A new Devil Hero

By : blacknightdemon
  • From Salios on November 24, 2008
    Good idea, but you badly need a beta to keep readers interested.
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  • From Blacktide on July 25, 2008
    It's pretty interesting up to this point hopefully you will finish writing this instead of abandon it like many authors do. Not that I'm accusing you of anything. Hope to see the anyone who is following dumbeldore or have a hand in anything in the events of Harry's horrible life be punished million times including Voldmort's side kicks. It will be good to see the brothers interactions with each other.
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  • From EscagirlUK on May 26, 2008
    You need a beta reader, a *lot*. English obviously isn't your first language, and it's kinda hard to get into a story when for every sentence you have to stop and rearrange it so it makes more sense.

    Otherwise, I thought the story was a pretty interesting idea. It's a bit slow-paced, though.
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  • From Vampirezdarkgurl on May 25, 2008
    Love the story. But I'd recommend getting a beta to read over the chapters before you post them since there are a few grammatical errors. Other than that keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the next chapter. :)
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  • From kyuubifreak on May 25, 2008
    cannot wait for more, how much money did dumbledore stole form him??
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  • From alma on May 25, 2008
    Good chapter, getting very interesting.
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  • From Elfwyn on May 20, 2008
    You wanted to know your errors. Twice you typed 160 for Harry's age instead of 16. Spelling his age might work better for you. Also you used the word lender when I think you wanted leader for Sparda's job description. Grammar is a little off in a few places but for writing in a second language you are doing very well.
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on May 18, 2008
    I like to read where you will go with this.
    Do continue.
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  • From alma on May 18, 2008
    Good chapter, can't wait to read more.
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  • From LadySilver on May 18, 2008
    This is a great story!! I can't wait to read more! please update again real soon!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!
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  • From angelkitty on May 18, 2008
    wow this is a great story and you are doing good with your english. i hope to read more of your story soon
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  • From kyuubifreak on May 17, 2008
    this story is cool, i am looking forward for more!!
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