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Reviews for The Last Gift

By : AndreaLorraine
  • From Mistress_Cinder on September 19, 2015
    Wow! This story has literally blown me away. I hope you are going to finish it. Dark, terrifying and amazing!
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  • From ANON - V on September 22, 2013
    This is amazingly good! Update please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2011
    Me again. I was so hoping you would finish this story, but it doesn't look like you'll be updating anytime soon... Well if you ever decide to I'd love to see where you take this in the final chapters!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2011
    I just wanted to leave a review after this very exciting chapter! I'll leave another after I finish the story, but for now I wanted to mention what an excellent writer you are. Your vivid details and precise plot line are captivating and heart wrenching. Every single sentence you write has purpose and meaning and the sexual tension you've built between Hermione and Lucius is not only believable but painful to read. I can't wait until the end - you better not kill them before they have sex again!

    Just two minor things. First, some of the chapter seem to have a formatting problem which makes them a bit hard to read. You have html coding in the middle of sentences breaking up trains of thought. If you have time I'm sure future readers would appreciate it if there's an easy solution to the problem. And second, I'm a biology major so I just thought I'd mention there's no difference in the DNA that one can obtain from a hair sample and blood sample - every cell in the human body contains the entire human genome. I understand the way blood has more of a macabre impact for the sake of story line, I just thought I'd mention it.

    Great work! I hope you have more stories I can read in the future! Now off I go to finish the tale...
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  • From Valerium on November 25, 2010
    Sometimes, I come here just looking for hot smut. In such cases, there is plenty to choose from, if I choose to overlook horrendous grammar. Every once in a while, though, I find a story that suggests the writer was truly inspired, as if the characters were alive and speaking through the author. This is one such story. (I'm also a fan of anyone who saves Severus, since he's my muse.) I'm really enjoying your work. Keep writing!
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  • From bluezauza on February 16, 2010
    OMG, this is heartbreaking , poor Lucius. He has suffered enough. You is ebil!
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  • From ANON - ebony_ink on February 16, 2010
    Brilliant story, I'm so glad to see it updated! This fic has been one of the most dramatic, compelling stories I've ever read in the fanfic community. I really loved the information about our protagonist's auras in this chapter. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Maddy on February 13, 2010
    I am writing to inform you that your story 'The Last Gift' has been nominated for 'Best Het' and 'Best Drama' in Always Hoping's FanFiction awards. If you approve of the nomination, please email me and I will add you to the Nominees.

    I'm sorry, but this was the only way I could figure out to contact you.

    Thank You,

    Maddy

    http:// always-hoping . 110mb . com
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  • From Kayrox133 on January 07, 2010
    Fantastic! I can't wait to see what's next.
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  • From ANON - Lucretia on January 06, 2010
    I love all your stories, you truly have a way with words and I like that whatever you do you end up with a mystery or another to solve; you did the same in Hungry Thirsty Crazy and you are doing it again with this story. You leave so many possibilities opened that the reader can't help getting obsessed and addicted to your wicked little tales.

    I love the complexity of the raw human emotions you manage to convey, I love the suspense, the drama, the unexpected and last but definitely not least, I love the sex scenes, you are one of the few authors that create believable, non-awkward, non-squishy and utterly delicious...ah...smut (ha, I love the synonyms that Word gives for this lovely word
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  • From ANON - Ithilwen on January 06, 2010
    I LOVE this fic.. Seriously, it's the kind where you sit at the edge of your seat kind of fic!

    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Bluedragon5544 on January 05, 2010
    I just got done reading all 8 chapters of this story and I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what will happen next. update when you can. please.
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  • From ANON - C on June 09, 2009
    So this is the second story you make me watch - and wait for the conclusion, and I doubt that it will be a happy one. I'm looking forward to find out what happens next!
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  • From Heidi191976 on May 31, 2009
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more. I hope that Lucius will be able to get back to Hogwarts and be able to take Pansy with him. I also hope that Hermione and Charlie can warn the others in time about the deatheater that is on the loose.
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  • From kazfeist on May 07, 2009
    Great chapter! I didn't realize you'd updated. What an action-packed one. :D
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