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Reviews for I'm A Slave for You

By : BlackGargie
  • From yaoified on October 25, 2008
    this is a good story... once i got past everyone being so young...

    but you would get more reviews if you put this under the Snarry section.
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  • From cravedom on October 15, 2008
    That figures, I stop checking for updates for a couple of weeks and suddenly the are two updates.

    Is a good thing Harry has gotten good at speaking or he would have never been able to tell anybody his name, not to sound cruel but I would have loved to hear him say it. I like that Harry is going to get to be courted, not only he deserves it but this will be a great way for Severus to make sure Harry really loves him and not just depend emotionally from him. The cool thing is that this is not real time and we wont have to wait forever to get some smut. Yeayyyy!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 22, 2008
    Awesome chapter.
    I can't wait to see what Severus will do to Harry's past masters!
    update!
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  • From cravedom on September 16, 2008
    Oooooohhooooo, where are youuuuu


    Is everything ok? I was trying to wait patiently but that got boring. So I thought maybe you need a gentle prod. Um, prod, prod, prod, poke, prod...
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on September 01, 2008
    Hehehe! Bye bye Godric! That was too good to be true!!
    It's a very good story, but you should be made aware that almost your entire plot is coming through only in the dialogue it appears. The beginning was very good, but the environmental description have gotten fewer and farther in between. Makes the story a bit harder to read. Anyway, looking forward to more!!

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 30, 2008
    "According to Harry Potter Wikia, J.K. Rowling revealed that Godric is the only one among the founders of Hogwarts who is still alive. He lives in the school lake as a Giant Squid Animagus and will appear in human form every eleventh hour of each night to wander around the school grounds before returning to the lake." What?? Are you sure? That seems pretty out there... even for the Magical World. Why isn't Godric dead? Being permanently in your Animagus doesn't extend your life like that.
    Anyway, that was a good chapter. I loved all the little things Harry has done throughout the school. I supposed Harry is a Creature Charmer then from Charlie's description.
    update!
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  • From Jan on August 28, 2008
    Wow! Harry's been a busy bee hasn't he! To think that while he was doing all this for all those people and creatures, he has also being raped by that bastard of a man!

    I can't wait to see what's going to happen next with Severus vs Dragon ^_^

    Please update chapter 35 soon!

    Jan
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 25, 2008
    Jeez, just when things were looking up...
    update!
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  • From ANON - cravedom on August 25, 2008
    Oh I love Charley!!!


    Poor, poor Hagrid. I am glad that he is around to help Severus but really it was cruel of Albus to send him on such a long trip with Mr. Cranky.

    But for the important part. AAAAAHHHHH, what happened with Remus? Lucius is so f...ing evil. I know they are not the starring pair but they are so sweet.


    Crap, Tom is back. Goodnes so many things happening, this story is getting so exciting. Keep it up.
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  • From Jan on August 25, 2008
    OMG!!! I hope Severus get's to Harry before Tom does!

    Please update chapter 34 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 23, 2008
    Jesus, just when I thought Lucius couldn't stoop any lower...
    Great writing! update!
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  • From Jan on August 23, 2008
    Wow! Could you make Lucius into more of a bastard!? I mean he's always been one, but you've made him above and beyond of a Bastard!

    I can't wait to see how Severus doing with his mission, Harry with his study and Draco/Remus! Gods I can't wait to know what's going to happen top them!

    Please update chapter 33 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From Visitkarte on August 04, 2008
    LOL, Little Red Hood sexy made...

    But I wonder why was Dumbledore so careless. If I were him, I'd have let the dirty old git swear the Unbreakable Wow to Severus that he would release Harry if he gets the Dragon Eye. This way, I know he is going to manage, barely surviving, and get tricked afterwards... A little too predictable. OK, I'm spoiled, I read too much Emily Waters...

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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 04, 2008
    Ack! A dragon's eye? Yikes!
    I loved the fluffy moment at the end there. Very sweet.
    Keep Severus safe!
    update!
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  • From ANON - Joanna on August 01, 2008
    I love this story!!
    You made me cry ;-;
    Please please please!free harry and let him be with Sev ~~~ KILL LUCIUS
    Update soon {:

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