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Reviews for Original Sin

By : amburnikole
  • From CraftMage on November 16, 2011
    Tease!!! Sooo good and then it stops. Please update soon.
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  • From newtothis on October 05, 2011
    one ron beat death eathers at 17 now he has training, he would be more then a match for lucius.

    to you make the former death eather seem like a small think, he was a serius murder, a nazi, ron not only have every right to not have his kids around him, but legally he could get for custudy becouse of her hermoine hanging out wtih,

    plus ron still a war hero, and still so he could get many people to just take lucius out,

    i understand what you are trying to do, but lusis past is a big deal.

    and ron not a kid, and would have more then a chance to kick lucius but.
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  • From Lizski on September 20, 2011
    Just finished Ch. 10. She's got more self-restraint than I do! I think at the point I had decided to kiss him, seriously kiss him, we wouldn't be going to bed just to sleep. But maybe that's just me! :-) Nice story - I like how you are developing the relationship of the ex-es, as well as the relationship with the children/grandchild. I look forward to more!
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  • From Avivafae on June 16, 2011
    Love this story. It's well written and the characters are very... enticing.
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  • From Sampdoria on May 28, 2011
    I really like this story, and I loved how Lucius took Ron to task (Ron bashing is some of my favourites)
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  • From Drea1256 on January 10, 2011
    Can't wait to read more. I love how they both are toying with the idea of each other but won't act on it. Please continue.
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  • From deatheaterqueenie on January 02, 2011
    This story is great! keep it up!
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  • From Koolgirl18 on December 31, 2010
    Ah Lucius Malfoy as a sweetheart--my heart is fluttering in my chest (though I love Lucius as a sweetheart I do so love his cold snarkiness--maybe he should bring it out on Ron ... please let him bring it out on Ron lol). I can't wait for Lucius to spend more time with Hermione's kids. I love the picture of him being covered with flour and baking cookies--a sexy sight indeed!

    Good work with the story. I noticed that you published it a year ago and I can see the improvement in your writing in these new chapters.

    I really hope you continue to update the story. I do so enjoy reading a softer Lucius every once and a while.

    Keep up the good work.

    Until the next chapter!

    Love, Hugs, and Kisses
    Koolgirl18
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  • From dragongirl on December 31, 2010
    Please!!!!!!!! I need to bottle Lucius essence........ LOL He is delicioso!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Avivafae on December 31, 2010
    OOoo.. Love the first 9 chapters. Leaving off with a swimming chapter was brilliant. Lucius in swim trunks; just so steamy! Can't wait to read more.
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  • From griffonsperch on December 31, 2010
    I love your style of writing, it's so easy and enjoyable to read. I'm already looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From dragongirl on December 30, 2010
    They are so cute together........... I hope they speak of their feelings and PRONTO>>>>>>> LOL Happy New Year!
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  • From dragongirl on December 29, 2010
    This is a wonderful story....... and we need more of it!!!!!!!! Please come back and update soon.....
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  • From LadyDisdain on September 12, 2008
    I like your story a lot! Update soon! im so curious as too what happens!
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  • From Amouse on August 17, 2008
    Wow, I love this story! Please update soon!
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