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Reviews for Lessons on a Broom

By : dirtydarella
  • From gossipgirl84 on May 16, 2014
    I was so into this story. It was going so well, until Harry was thrusting into Draco. Why is it always Draco who's on the bottom? it's so dull and boring. I need more Top Draco. It frustrates me so much. I am a Top Draco girl.
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  • From callistianstar on September 07, 2008
    :) That ending was so perfect. I have to admit that I was really surprised by that snake cane comment. lol This was fabulous. Nice job.
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  • From SickPuppy on August 04, 2008
    Another lovely story! So nice to see Scorpius not caring about Lucius' feelings. I laughed so much when I read the letter! (One tiny Britpick: Pubs in the UK generally don't have table waitress/waiter service). Other than that, great! SP
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 17, 2008
    Wonderful!
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  • From on July 14, 2008
    Great build up, and when they finally got together... HOT!!!
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  • From AlphazSlut on July 14, 2008
    I love it! It's really well written and I love the mixed themes. Though I have to say my favorite part was the 'Adult Grape Juice'! LOL, I love it!
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on July 14, 2008
    Short but sweet! Loved Scorpius' letter and shout out to Lucius and James was an amusing addition.
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  • From Jilliane on July 14, 2008

    Awww, this was sweet and romantic (I'm such a sap!) with the happy ending I adore. Yay! I'd say you lived up to the challenge.

    You had a nice variation having them being private flying instructors. That's something I haven't seen until now. With Harry and Draco, I really don't mind who is top and who is bottom, either is fine, but I really enjoy an insecure Draco who is worried about doing something stupid to turn Harry away from him. I nearly choked on my own coffee laughing at Scorpius' letter to Draco, with the "If grandpa doesn't approve, tell him he can go fuck himself with his snake cane." That was priceless. James catching Harry and Draco snogging down an alley like a couple of randy schoolboys was delightful, and I would have loved to see the expression on Draco's face at James' parting shot about Scorpius and Albus.

    A nicely written little oneshot that was a pleasure to read!


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