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Reviews for Life in an Alien Land 1: In the Land of My Enemy

By : tambrathegreat
  • From wishywashy on August 03, 2008
    i like this. different from what i usually read. kind of sad to see crazy draco has been replaced with amnesiac draco. i wonder how he will first be identified? maybe school shopping with niahm someone will say 'hi draco' or something more dramatic. his eyes meet hermiones from across a room and his memmory is instantly restored. whatever it is it'll no doubt be better than any of my guesses. i look forward to finding out what it is.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2008
    This is beautiful I love it. Poor draco thinking his is drew and poor little niamph
    How will hermione and draco get back together.
    Beautiful
    Please update soon
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  • From Jilliane on August 02, 2008
    (Chapter 8)

    Thanks so much for your kind words!


    It's getting so difficult to review this story....but only because I'm running out of words to describe the awesomeness of it. In terms of quality of writing, imagination, originality, and scope, I think you've just hit a new high. It's the scope and dimension, not to mention the impressive writing and it's all just enthralling. Your writing is big and epic and just so freaking fantastic! You know I am not a fan of Hermione, but your Hermione.....suffice it to say that you've done the impossible and actually made me feel for her! It was so sad, I felt badly for her when Ali Khan had to leave, but even so, I can't help but hold out for Draco returning to her...her lost boy...the tragedy of it....feeling that he's out there, not knowing for sure, hoping against hope.......And then the lost boy himself, Draco, with his new and good life. His madness gone, a new job, a new purpose, people who love and care about him....but always the lingering shadow of his former life. Will Draco and Hermione ever find one another again? Will Niamh going off to Hogwarts be what brings them together? Will Draco know Hermione if they do find one another? Will he remember her? Delphine? Will Scorpius gain a father? OMG, please update again soon! I can barely wait to find out!


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  • From margotlefaye on August 02, 2008
    Well, your a.n. at the end asked us to let you know what we think, so here goes: What I think is that you are absolutely EVIL for keeping us on tenterhooks like this. Oh, yeah, and that your Ali Khan was very nicely drawn, and that I like what you've done in melding the Muggle and Wizarding worlds, and that all your OCs are very three dimensional, with nothing remotely Mary Sue about them that I can see. Now, I do think that it is unbelievable that Lucius and Hermione wouldn't have gone through the wreckage of Little Hangleton with a fine tooth comb and had Aurors go over every square inch of it looking for Draco's body, but I'm entertained enough by everything else you've done to worry about that overmuch. Again, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Myene on July 31, 2008
    Drew? for the DR sound?

    Why did he survive and the child did not?

    Intresting chappie. I like how, after and year/2 years of being ruled over, they arn't wizard, but just some odd people in funny outfits.
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  • From margotlefaye on July 30, 2008
    Yay! I'm really glad you found a way to redeem Draco from his madness. I look forward to the inevitable reunion.
    It's going to be interesting to see how things shake out with the various Death Eaters and spies, now that Voldemort has fallen. Who is going to end up in Azkaban, and who is going to get the Order of Merlin, that sort of thing. Can't wait to see what you've got planned.
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on July 29, 2008
    I love direction this is going. There for a moment I thought you might end it, but you didn't. The woman child was creepy and awesomely written. Love it!
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  • From sherrithewriter on July 29, 2008
    Hmm, interesting turn of events. I wonder what will happen to all of the women and the children born of those unions? How will Draco get back? Can't wait for the updates!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2008
    That was a great new chapter keep writing its great
    How will hermione find draco now and will he recover all his memory. Are their any other survivers.
    Update soon
    Bye
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  • From Jilliane on July 29, 2008
    (Chapter 7)

    Fabulous chapter!! OMG, I am so in love with this story! All your stories!

    I wonder if Draco will ever get his memory back? Will Hermione and Lucius go looking for him, and will they find him if they do? How will Lucius and Tonks' relationship pan out? And what will happen to all those other girls?

    Again, I love this story! You are just and excellent writer with a fabulous imagination. Please update soon!
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  • From gammiepie on July 26, 2008
    How in the seven green hells can you leave me hanging like that?
    Hermione can do magic???????????

    UPDATE!
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  • From margotlefaye on July 25, 2008
    This is such a sad story. I feel so badly for Draco. It seems he's going to sacrifice himself, and has no plans to survive. No one in the story is in a good place. They're all broken, one way or another, and they're all trying to survive as best they can. I hope Draco's heroism can be rewarded, that he can survive to build a life with Hermione. But I don't really expect that to happen.
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  • From ANON - Sicca on July 25, 2008
    Wow. This is such an interesting story, with real depth in the characters. Great job!
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  • From sherrithewriter on July 24, 2008
    I was having a difficult time getting to the reviews for Chapter 6-- however, I made it! Chapter 6 was kind of confusing. I am glad that Lucius and Tonks are working on their relationship -- I can kind of see that working. I hope you go into more detail about what Draco is up to -- I think that's where I got confused and some of the stuff about Snape. So, Snape and Ginny are both werewolves? I look forward to your update -- you are penning a fascinating story.
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on July 24, 2008
    I love snapes reaction to everything...especially the ending
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