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Reviews for Love Songs

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From luv2cusmile on December 01, 2008
    i so didn't want this one to end!!!!!!!! sequel!! i'm like dying over here. pretty please. =D
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 26, 2008
    Loved it! the idea of Lucius making himself a Mione voodoo doll is hilarious....was he going to molest it? LMAO



    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on October 12, 2008
    I love total eclipse of the heart.....have since I was a teenager.....I can recall vividly hearing it on the radio and during the second set of "turn around" him cutting in and yelling "turn around bitch!" not sure why I still recall that, but I do LMAO...anyhoo...


    I of course love any fic that features dead narcissa....after birthing draco she was completely unnecessary and should have been disposed of immediately. I also love anything that features a redeemed Lucius, because I love him so.....


    Great job hon!!!!!!


    S_G
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  • From helenesnape on October 12, 2008
    Total Eclipse of the Heart: Like it??? I loved it. That song is so complex. It has so many differing emotions that I couldn't imagine attempting it myself. I had a fleeting moment where I thought I might (I swear I'm going to call my cable company and have them delete VH1 from my channel line up) but I couldn't wrap my mind around how I would get the story to work with the song.

    Excellent job! Your fic really fit the song, conveying Lucius emotions over losing Narcissa and Hermione's ups and downs over how her life turned out. The fact that he finally realized he could let Narcissa go so he could fully love Hermione was just the icing on the cake. Great song fic!

    Looking forward to reading more of your work!
    MHS
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  • From ginnyginny on October 11, 2008
    wow. I don't even know where to begin. The story cukd have been ok, but the grammar was horrible. I can understand if you are not a native speaker, but you might want to try using a beta.
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  • From smmz79 on October 09, 2008
    LOVED IT!!!! what a great song fic.... great job
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  • From wishyouwere on October 08, 2008
    This is a review for the 'Magic Man' chapter...

    I feel compelled to say that the way you wrote the story coupled with the lyrics TOTALLY made me think of the song!
    Now, there were a handful of editing errors that tend to drive me a little batty (but I can't be too much of a hypocrite as my story has its share) but if you ever want me to give your work a quick look over, I would be more than happy to do it.
    Bottom line...brilliant use of the lyrics and totally fitting for his character...well done!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on October 08, 2008
    Magic Man: Ok, so heart rocks! I recently saw them in concert and they were just amazing!! When I hear that song i usually think of Lucius or Draco too!!!! you and I obviously have very similar tastes in music and wizards. ;) well done you!


    S_G
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2008
    To Mrs Helene_Snape - that was indeed magical. :) And oh how I'd long to have such a Magic Man to worship at the alter of my womanhood too. (I loved that line). Absolutely brilliant! (sad to fall out with her mum though but such is life).
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2008
    My congratulations to each and every writer who contributed to this challenge. Your stories were all fabulous, thought provoking, romantic, emotional, sad and breath taking in their turn. My thanks again to S_G for the challenge and to all those who took part with their wonderful tales. :)
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 11, 2008
    "Rush Hour" by Scary Bear Hair

    Woo Hoo, I do love Lucius behind the wheel of a hot car. the image of his driving gloves alone makes for a hot flash. And the blue jeans and leather jacket are yummy visuals, just scrumptious.

    Hermione asking, "So, where are you going to take me?" had all sorts of interesting connotations. She wasn't much frightened of him to get into the car so easily. That bodes well. He says she can't leave his bed until he gives her permission. Well, duh, who'd want to leave? LOL.

    He's such a horrible, clueless driver, it juxtaposes so wickedly with his normal persona. I loved that.

    The story was fast-paced, cute and scary at the same time. What a thrill ride with Mr. Arrogance!

    (Sorry I didn't review this before, Scary. I think I just got sidetracked and forgot.)


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  • From ANON - ~AJlove~ on September 08, 2008
    Does He Love You

    I can't BELIEVE that I didn't think to write a story to this song! I LOVE this song! It fits perfectly! I just can't believe how you ended it! Well done! Great song, great fic!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 13, 2008
    I loved this Scary! I can totally see Lucius driving through the streets, manically. LOL

    Brilliantly written and I actually felt like I was there in the car with them! *Sighs...Oh to be locked in a car with good ol' Luci...*

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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  • From ANON - cosmo on August 13, 2008
    to Scary Bear Hair:

    very cool fic, i thoroughly enjoyed the piece and, if possible, would love a continuation where we get more insight on Lucius's feelings and if this is just a fling, as was with the rest of the employees, or he really is serious about her, that was the one tidbit i thought was missing

    brill work there!
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  • From Scarybearhair on August 13, 2008
    I took my original review down because I spelled ficlets like filets. lol
    I swear I am such a dork! lol

    Anyway I loved this idea and I love all the stories! They are all so beautifully written too! They really go through a range of emotions. Some are funny and others are rather poignant and bittersweet.

    As you can see I added to the group with Rush Hour. Thanks for the lovely review Snape Goddess. You are a sweetie. And what a lovely collection this is!


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