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Reviews for Cost of Mercy (story for SoftObsidian)

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - Ms. M on June 29, 2009
    I am still reading the 1st paragraph. But, I know it will be a great story!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on November 23, 2008
    Wow, Emily...That was so awe inspiring, I'm speechless.

    You are a imaginative writer, and I could see it all in my head as I read.

    _LadyVoldemort87_
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 04, 2008
    wow
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  • From llc on August 01, 2008
    WOW!!

    my GOD

    This is BRILLIANT!

    SO DARK!

    God this is written so well, my breath is literally captured in my throat.

    I was in a rather dark sad place tonight, i needed a read like this to fit the mood.

    god i have to say this part, made my chest constrict
    "She gave him forgiveness then. Some say, when you grant forgiveness, it liberates you. Not so, she thinks; forgiveness is the ultimate act of submission. By forgiving, you agree to bear the sins of the other, even if it maims you, even if kills you; and even if it doesn't."

    God this story is brilliant. Disturbing, but ... BAH! no words!

    Bravo! You must write more!

    -ness
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  • From dynonugget on July 27, 2008
    Good grief! Nothing light and fluffy here! WOW.

    I love there are no excuses, just Darkness. Creepy but good.
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  • From sjauthor on July 27, 2008
    Uhg...chilling! Very well written, very creepy. Especially the last sentence,
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  • From callistianstar on July 25, 2008
    huh. Wow. well then. That sucks. Was not expecting that. The only thing I can say is I'm glad you didn't make Hermione turned on by it at all. Change the mood quite a bit, it would. The writing is excellent, but a "nice job" doesn't seem quite fitting here. lol
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on July 25, 2008
    Oh.....wow...

    ::Blinks::

    Damn. This is probably the most brutal rape fic you've written, and that's really saying something coming from you. I'm not even remotely turned on or anything. LOL! I like how authentic Draco's character feels. Seems like something canon Draco would be capable of doing if he felt that he was being too weak and if he had been shown compassion by someone he considered inferior. I can feel Hermione's anguish and regret for showing him compassion and her self-loathing for wanting death because of the torment he's inflicting on her, believing she deserves it for all of the lives lost because of her compassion.

    Absolutely haunting and awful Emily. Thanks for writing this for me...I mean, I think. I'm probably gonna have nightmares : )

    Oh, and don't worry, I'm gonna get started on your Snarry (my first Snarry!) as soon as Dubious is over : ) Do you want it this dark? Damn this was dark! ::::goes to turn lights on and puts on happy music::::

    Thanks so much man!
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  • From Visitkarte on July 25, 2008
    No, I don't like it. OK, it's still unmistakably Emily
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