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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part III: Merlin's Tomb

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From AngelPoppet on November 27, 2010
    I'm not a fan of Ron either but I'm glad you redeemed him. I think it would be too unrealistic to have everyone turning on Hermione just because Ron's gay, it's weird enough that Harry would be off with her. I loved the description of the picture of Hermione and Sev at the beach, it reminded me of Johnny Depp in Sweeny Todd when he's sat at the beach in old style swimwear scowling :)
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  • From purefaith91 on November 17, 2010
    Very enjoyable read. I was kind of thrown in the last chapter when they were so argumentative and then saying that arguing is "what they do", as it seemed that they had melded together (in spite of their drastic differences) once she got passed his past until the issue of work came up between them. The epilogue had them back as I had pictured throughout the story with Lucius being sweet again. Thank you for many hours of reading pleasure and for sharing your talents with us. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 17, 2010
    Yes, it is definitely sad. My nickname isn't Wonder Wuss for nothing as I sit her crying. Glad that you are writing a story for SS, but it doesn't make this one easier. I am so glad that you had her tell SS that he was her soul mate. I had thought it was a shame when she was thinking it earlier that SS would never know how much he meant to her. It's hard to be happy for Lucius when so sad for Severus. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 17, 2010
    Lucius has a deeper problem in his relationship with Hermione than her job. It is not very mature of her to run to SS the first time she has an argument with Lucius. Not very fair of her when she has threatened Lucius with SS before. While he cannot dictate her life choices, coming in and finding her back in the exact job that caused him to almost lose her was not the way to do it. She should have talked to him so that emotions did not surface before the first word was uttered. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 17, 2010
    Yay and kudos to Draco, Lucius and Hermione (and SS deserves credit for teaching HG to defend herself). This is my favorite chapter of all three stories so far. I love your characters. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 17, 2010
    Awwww. I kept thinking that he had not told her that he loved her yet, but now he did and bless his heart, he has someone that loves just him. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 16, 2010
    See what a good man SS is? He could have swooped in and taken advantage of LM's leaving. And since he did not know how Lucius felt, he obviously cut off his friendship for her. Excellent! p
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on August 28, 2009
    I finally finished reading this trilogy and again I am in awe of your creativity and your writing skills. Thanks again for sharing this with the masses.
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  • From cathyhester on March 20, 2009
    Recently discovered your story which I greatly enjoyed. Thanks for writing. I'm so glad I didn't pass this by because it isn't my most favorite couple. A lot of the stories I've read don't portray Lucius in a kind light, this definitely showed a different side. Again thanks for writing this trilogy.

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  • From smmz79 on January 23, 2009
    ice story i loved each part... i really enjoyed hermiones personality in this fic you wrote her very confident!!!! i really enjoyed severus and how he embraced his sexuality and the relationship that he has with hermione the bond that they have.... lucius was perfect in this very strong but tender i like the way thatyou wrote him... but he still had traces of the old lucius that was great as well.... wonderful job now onto a severus fic or maybe i will read something in the way she moves again???
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  • From smmz79 on January 23, 2009
    awww now that was a sweet honeymoon night... great shower action and i love how romantic lucius is!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    aaaawwww poor severus.... but great wedding... and i love that draco still tries to drive lucius crazy..... i loved that he kissed her and called her mummy that was funny!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    yeahhhh i was hoping lucius would come to her since hermione came to him in the beginning of this fic... yeah they are getting married this should be interesting news.... esp with the weasleys....
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    ahhh i love severus in this!!!!! so he is helping hermione to see the other side of this or at least what lucius was TRYING to say... and draco is funny he loves poking lucius and driving him to the brink when he is in a foul mood...
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    wow while i think that lucius handled that ALL wrong i do think that there is a middle ground here.... great chap
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